Desire
Woman in heat24 total reviews
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hi..You definitely brought life to the picture. I liked the sort of gentle beginning, to the climatic ending to this. I wouldn't change anything in the story. Good luck and cheers.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Hi..You definitely brought life to the picture. I liked the sort of gentle beginning, to the climatic ending to this. I wouldn't change anything in the story. Good luck and cheers.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Thank you Again Benjamin for another excellent review! Wasn't sure I could craft such a piece but found it quite easy lol!
God bless!
Comment from Leineco
Ahhh. . .the "sneak attack" [wink]
This was almost an ode to morning sex,
-interest piqued, she makes her move, claiming the prize she's after
-he wakes and squeals his approval
-together they ride the wave of pulsating need
-and, oh, the nail boring clench of crescendo!
(When we've finally finished reviewing. . .I think there are some unsuspecting spouses/significant others about to "treated" ;-)
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Ahhh. . .the "sneak attack" [wink]
This was almost an ode to morning sex,
-interest piqued, she makes her move, claiming the prize she's after
-he wakes and squeals his approval
-together they ride the wave of pulsating need
-and, oh, the nail boring clench of crescendo!
(When we've finally finished reviewing. . .I think there are some unsuspecting spouses/significant others about to "treated" ;-)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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LOL! Best review so far my friend! Wasn't sure I was up to the task of crafting such a piece.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from justafan
Well now, Stevie boy, look at you!!! All sexed up, I think this is hot!! You have certainly fulfilled the contest requirements with this sug.
Always justafan,
Missy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Well now, Stevie boy, look at you!!! All sexed up, I think this is hot!! You have certainly fulfilled the contest requirements with this sug.
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Thank you Missy lol! I wasn't sure I could craft a piece like this, but I certainly enjoyed doing so!
God bless!
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I am still smilin :)
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LOL! Me too!
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LOL! Me too!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
I like your copulation poem it has a nice rhyme and flow. The wording is explicit and the message gets through loud and clear. Good job!
~gypsy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Hello :)
I like your copulation poem it has a nice rhyme and flow. The wording is explicit and the message gets through loud and clear. Good job!
~gypsy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Thank you Gypsy for another awesome review my friend.
God bless!
Comment from lancellot
Oh, that is just how I would love to wake up at anytime of the night. I wouldn't mind at all. But, only in my dreams. Great stuff. I love the heat, and the passion. A woman show take what she wants, nice.
Are you sure about that last line?
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Oh, that is just how I would love to wake up at anytime of the night. I wouldn't mind at all. But, only in my dreams. Great stuff. I love the heat, and the passion. A woman show take what she wants, nice.
Are you sure about that last line?
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Thank you Lancellot for this incredible review. I wasn't sure I could muster up such a piece. I sure did enjoy the challenge lol!
God bless!
Comment from Sasha
I cannot imagine anyone's heart not pounding after reading this. And it rhymes too! Great entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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I cannot imagine anyone's heart not pounding after reading this. And it rhymes too! Great entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Thank you Smurph for the excellent review. I enjoyed crafting this one.
God bless!
Comment from Domino 2
Great to see you enter, Steve - no pun intended. LOL.
Regarding the artwork, the best erections are sometimes in the morning when we wake - though they're apparently not always connected to sexual arousal, but as us Brits call them -'piss-proud' (an urgent need for a pee) - and of course, in view of that, it's difficult unless one can stand on one's head in front of the loo. ;-)
With the upmost respect, my friend, I wasn't sure about 'masturbated', as it appears clear they have had REAL sex together - unless they're both fantasising at the same time.
If that's the case, then please ignore me, but if not, then maybe, 'they both are decimated'.
Anyway, that minor nit-pick aside, this CERTAINLY meets the contest requirements of 'hot and steamy', and it's NOT smut for the sake of smut, but also has a fun and sensual side to it.
Excellent!
Now, sort out your meter! LOL.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Great to see you enter, Steve - no pun intended. LOL.
Regarding the artwork, the best erections are sometimes in the morning when we wake - though they're apparently not always connected to sexual arousal, but as us Brits call them -'piss-proud' (an urgent need for a pee) - and of course, in view of that, it's difficult unless one can stand on one's head in front of the loo. ;-)
With the upmost respect, my friend, I wasn't sure about 'masturbated', as it appears clear they have had REAL sex together - unless they're both fantasising at the same time.
If that's the case, then please ignore me, but if not, then maybe, 'they both are decimated'.
Anyway, that minor nit-pick aside, this CERTAINLY meets the contest requirements of 'hot and steamy', and it's NOT smut for the sake of smut, but also has a fun and sensual side to it.
Excellent!
Now, sort out your meter! LOL.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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LOL! You are too funny Ray! I live in the country I just take it to the back porch lol! Thank you as usual for the incredible and insightful review my friend. I left it to masturbated as for the contest had started by the time I was able to read my reviews. I don't feel it fair to change anything after a contest has begun. But after careful consideration I feel this could be a dream between the two, depending on the viewer. But this was not my intention.
God bless my friend!
Steve
Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE
Oh! How happy I am to think of my grand daughter unfurling and flowering with awakening awareness of self and other with the intimate miracles and joy of desire and sexuality within the fullness of life.
As part of academia in the 1980's I read of Masters and Johnson along side Germaine Greer. I feel humanity has flowered excitingly through the heart since then, freeing so much natural beauty to develop and blossom into a new love. A new individually self-confident love has emerged, which nurtures our young as it empowers their parents proudly breast-feed, wherever they can happily fulfill the desires of love, respectfully.
I am aware this is the silver lining I happily focus on, perhaps typical of the strange breed of animal passionately loving the flowering and joys within human families. For me this is the harvest of Christ, and your Words the creative inspiration and tantalizing perfumes of a glorious spring.
Thank you, for gifting our world with the beauty of desire. Blessings, Maureen*&*
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Oh! How happy I am to think of my grand daughter unfurling and flowering with awakening awareness of self and other with the intimate miracles and joy of desire and sexuality within the fullness of life.
As part of academia in the 1980's I read of Masters and Johnson along side Germaine Greer. I feel humanity has flowered excitingly through the heart since then, freeing so much natural beauty to develop and blossom into a new love. A new individually self-confident love has emerged, which nurtures our young as it empowers their parents proudly breast-feed, wherever they can happily fulfill the desires of love, respectfully.
I am aware this is the silver lining I happily focus on, perhaps typical of the strange breed of animal passionately loving the flowering and joys within human families. For me this is the harvest of Christ, and your Words the creative inspiration and tantalizing perfumes of a glorious spring.
Thank you, for gifting our world with the beauty of desire. Blessings, Maureen*&*
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Thank you A.A.A. for this most excellent and expressive review. I love getting reviews on this level and I certainly enjoy the six star rating. God bless!
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God bless you too, precious soul*&*
Comment from TAB_that's me
Yours is definitely hot!! You did a great job with that! It is written in great and rhyme and meter. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Yours is definitely hot!! You did a great job with that! It is written in great and rhyme and meter. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Thank you Teresa, I always love reading your reviews.
God bless!
Comment from barkingdog
A big surprise for both of them--his rise and her ride.
I liked your rhyming quatrains about this couples sexual romp.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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A big surprise for both of them--his rise and her ride.
I liked your rhyming quatrains about this couples sexual romp.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Thank you Barkingdog for another excellent review my friend. I love surprises lol!
God bless!