To Cherish Thorns
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "Why I Divorced a Writer"Free Verse Poetry
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Comment from Unspoken94
This is the quintessential understanding of puns! And of course, us writers of poetry are so misunderstood. We just can't help ourselves. A wonderful contribution to this contest and I appreciate now why I've been divorced so often! LOL
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
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This is the quintessential understanding of puns! And of course, us writers of poetry are so misunderstood. We just can't help ourselves. A wonderful contribution to this contest and I appreciate now why I've been divorced so often! LOL
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
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Hahaha! Fortunately, my wife pays no attention to me. :)
Thank you so much.
Comment from alphonsus murgatroyd
Are you SURE none of this is autobiographical? ;) But no matter, I love it anyway. As my profile says, I am an 'unrepentant wordsmith' so can well appreciate a skillful and witty use of words in the writing of another. I laughed out loud when I reached the end, and I especially loved the 'cork for my assonance'.
Great work!
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Are you SURE none of this is autobiographical? ;) But no matter, I love it anyway. As my profile says, I am an 'unrepentant wordsmith' so can well appreciate a skillful and witty use of words in the writing of another. I laughed out loud when I reached the end, and I especially loved the 'cork for my assonance'.
Great work!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
Comment from clsandau
Pretty creative writing. Guess its not a good idea to marry a write!! Glad it was only imaginary. Great picture to go with your poem. Good luck in contest, Carol
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Pretty creative writing. Guess its not a good idea to marry a write!! Glad it was only imaginary. Great picture to go with your poem. Good luck in contest, Carol
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a creative and funny poem. I thought you did an excellent job of sharing why you divorced a writer. Well deserved! I have no idea what half those words mean! Very creative and funny.
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What a creative and funny poem. I thought you did an excellent job of sharing why you divorced a writer. Well deserved! I have no idea what half those words mean! Very creative and funny.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
Comment from rspoet
This is excellent and should do well in the How Punny R U contest
You've the the grammatical gamut
I'm glad you didn't go into the colon
that would have been a little messy
Good use of enjambment, the word that is
and alliteration, again the word
Great picture to poem match
This should be a contender
well done
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This is excellent and should do well in the How Punny R U contest
You've the the grammatical gamut
I'm glad you didn't go into the colon
that would have been a little messy
Good use of enjambment, the word that is
and alliteration, again the word
Great picture to poem match
This should be a contender
well done
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
Comment from RYME4U
Very clever and the language of writers is portrayed in an excellent manner.I like the jazzy talk and word picture you paint. Great job!
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Very clever and the language of writers is portrayed in an excellent manner.I like the jazzy talk and word picture you paint. Great job!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
Comment from country ranch writer
she done the right thing by kicking hi to the curb using words like that to try to get it on with her wow he has his nerve just saying
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she done the right thing by kicking hi to the curb using words like that to try to get it on with her wow he has his nerve just saying
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
Comment from Cass Carlton
This is a lot of fun. What I'd call Clayton's Smut. which is smut you talk when you aren't being potty mouthed. For instance I was once invited to look at some-one's digitals , but I declined , warning him to keep his hands off my analogue.
I believe you , I DO! that this is not autobiographical. Thanks for sharing Lots of fun cheers Cass
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This is a lot of fun. What I'd call Clayton's Smut. which is smut you talk when you aren't being potty mouthed. For instance I was once invited to look at some-one's digitals , but I declined , warning him to keep his hands off my analogue.
I believe you , I DO! that this is not autobiographical. Thanks for sharing Lots of fun cheers Cass
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2015