haiku (rogue raindrops)
heavenly tears16 total reviews
Comment from dmt1967
I like the picture of rain drops on the window pain and I enjoyed reading this short but entertaining puzzle. It was very nice. I hope you do well in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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I like the picture of rain drops on the window pain and I enjoyed reading this short but entertaining puzzle. It was very nice. I hope you do well in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2015
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I appreciate the read and review.
Comment from ann marie mazz
hello
this entry is beautiful
I enjoyed your theme and usage of water
you have met the challenge with theme and format
well done
thank you for sharing your talent
best of luck with the contest
ann marie
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hello
this entry is beautiful
I enjoyed your theme and usage of water
you have met the challenge with theme and format
well done
thank you for sharing your talent
best of luck with the contest
ann marie
Comment Written 07-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
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Thanks so much.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
You did a good job with this 3/5/3 poem about water. You have the correct amount of syllables. I like the picture you added and the colors you chose. Nice satori line imagery. Good job!
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You did a good job with this 3/5/3 poem about water. You have the correct amount of syllables. I like the picture you added and the colors you chose. Nice satori line imagery. Good job!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2015
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I appreciate the read and review.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a saucy little 3-5-3 water poem. Form and syllable counts are correct and it is very nicely presented. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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This is a saucy little 3-5-3 water poem. Form and syllable counts are correct and it is very nicely presented. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 07-Jul-2015
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Thanks so much.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Your syllable count is perfect for the prompt. Great 'r' alliteration. Good imagery and nice overall piece. Good luck to you.
Teresa
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Your syllable count is perfect for the prompt. Great 'r' alliteration. Good imagery and nice overall piece. Good luck to you.
Teresa
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2015
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Thank you very much
Comment from RodG
I am very impressed with this 3-5-3 which says so much.
I really like the description of such raindrops as "rogue." A great contrast between their 100% proof purity and alcohol's . Also loved the double meaning of your last line.
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I am very impressed with this 3-5-3 which says so much.
I really like the description of such raindrops as "rogue." A great contrast between their 100% proof purity and alcohol's . Also loved the double meaning of your last line.
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2015
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Thanks so much. I'm glad my intent was realized.