Comment from angel123

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your meaningful, well written poem. It flows well and has a meaningful message. Where there is water there is life. I like your artwork choice.

Angel123

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015

Thanks Angel for your kind and supportive comments. Much appreciated.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Nice job with this 3/5/3 poem. Correct number of syllables, two lines of interconnected lines and a satori line. I like the picture and colors you used.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015

Thank you, Gypsy Blue Rose, for checking out my poem, and for your kind comments.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

They say life can't exist without water. Sometimes I wonder, one day we'll find something totally different. As for Earth, that's her story, and ours too. Wonderfully written. Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015

Thank you for your very kind words, Les. Much appreciated!

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

The dawning of life, life evolved in water and so life was born. Well chosen words and theme. Good accompanying picture. Good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015

Thank you Faye for your kind review and good wishes. I really appreciate both.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Very nicely done. I think you have done a great job of painting a picture with just a few words and three lines. Very creative and well written. I enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015

Thanks, Michael, for checking out my poem, and for your kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Very good 3-5-3 water poem for the prompt. Your thoughts are insightful and creatively worded. Good luck to you in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015

Thank you Teresa for your kind words and good wishes. Much appreciated!

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I love the little haikus and a poem that teaches a lesson as well. I enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015

Thank you for your kind remarks and your good wishes. They are both much appreciated.

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This meets the form and syllable count requirements of the 3-5-3 water prompt, and the presentation is dramatic. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015

Thank you Jeanie for checking out my poem, and for your good wishes. Much appreciated.

Comment from Jose Saic

Excellent

Excellent poem 3-5-3 that gives the reader thoughts about the origin of life in its verses which is related with a deep concept subject for scientist.
Congratulations.
 

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015

Thank you very much, Jose, for your kind words. They are much appreciated!

reply by Jose Saic on 07-Jul-2015

You are welcome.

reply by Jose Saic on 08-Jul-2015

You are welcome.