This one's mine...
More than a contest?11 total reviews
Comment from Jacob Collins
A well written piece which I thought was full of description and action packed throughout. I particularly liked: pulsated with electrical energy. Great use of imagery there. I couldn't find anything to critique. Good luck in the contest...Jacob
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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A well written piece which I thought was full of description and action packed throughout. I particularly liked: pulsated with electrical energy. Great use of imagery there. I couldn't find anything to critique. Good luck in the contest...Jacob
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Many thanks for the review, Jacob. As always, it is very much appreciated.