Comment from Njorgensen

Excellent

Ah, I love a good Irish jig.
This poem reads well and carries a peppy cadence to reflect the lighthearted story of this pub. I liked the rhyming of the quatrains. They didn't seem forced.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015

Thanks for the wonderful comments and the affirmation of enjoyment. That means a lot to me.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

Carolyn, this was indeed a very fun and interesting read. I have never heard of the pub. The next time I go to Destin, I will definitely visit McGuire's.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015

It has been suggested that I market for them..LOL I am so glad you enjoyed the poem V. The food was great.
:-) Carolyn

reply by Cajungirl on 17-Mar-2015

You are welcome.

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This is a fun poem and, although the meter was out slightly, a good poem non the less. I enjoyed the gaiety of this little jig and loved the picture. This is a very nice poem and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015

And thank you for reading and commenting. I so appreciate you.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,

Your poem is very nice and was a good read. I can't believe that they'd have real money hanging all over the restaurant though. I've never heard of any other place hanging money all over. I think you did a good job in writing this.

Kat

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015

I have been to several restaurants that have this practice, however I have never seen so many dollar bills nor had a count of how many..... A million and a half dollars is incredible..
:-) Carolyn

reply by MizKat on 17-Mar-2015

Seeing so much money hanging around must have been interesting.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like the photo you chose for your poem ,and I thought it was a nice read.
You had my attention from the start.
Thank you very much for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015

Thanks Cookie,
It was a fun write and a great place to eat...
:-) Carolyn

reply by misscookie on 17-Mar-2015

You're very welcome.Have a blessed day.
Cookie

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Just hanging around. indeed that's sounds like a magical place, That's a wonderful expressed poem, nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs! lakeport,.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015

Thanks E,
Was a fun place to eat., Glad you enjoyed the read.
:-) Carolyn

reply by lakeport on 17-Mar-2015

you are very welcome,Hugs! Lakeport.

Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Excellent

This sounds like a special restaurant to visit. Good rhyme used to enhance the flow of your writing. Well done!

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015

Thanks Sarah,
Yes, it was a part of a fun week.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love this Carolyn, fancy walking into a restaurant, and see all the money that you would ever hope to see, and not be able to walk out with it! Perhaps we could go and eat there just before closing and tell them we would lock up, "leave the keys" then we could abscond with all the money! Beautifully written my friend, as usual, love the Photo, Blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015

Hi Roy,
Yes it was a lot of money, evidently some of the workers decided they would peel a few bills. Naturally they are all marked, signed dated and the like. They were caught the very moment they tried to spend them.
Thanks for the fun review.
Love, Carolyn

reply by royowen on 17-Mar-2015

Hee, hee, I like that carolyn

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

good use of abcb rhyming
good enjambment to keep thought flowing from line to line
effective use of listing/repetition in the money in the...passage
good detail of this place delivered with an enthusiastic sense of appreciation :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015

Thanks Brooke for this wonderful review. So glad you enjoyed the read.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Carolyn. AHHHHH! Now I see the dollar bill. I enjoyed your witty little piece here and I also got an education in the process. I thought the meter was fine on this mate, cheers Fez

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015

Thanks Fez, I am glad my explanation cleared everything up... I forget money appearances change from place to place.
So glad you enjoyed this one.....
Love to the family,
Carolyn