What Fate Awaits
between the darkness and the light13 total reviews
Comment from Emily George
Makes you want to stay in the light . Scary and that picture. I do love that word moribund. This was a very haunting poem, particularly the last verse where you ask that all so pertinent question.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2015
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Makes you want to stay in the light . Scary and that picture. I do love that word moribund. This was a very haunting poem, particularly the last verse where you ask that all so pertinent question.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2015
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Many thanks for the great review, and the gift of stars. Much appreciated
Comment from Jackreese
This piece was a bit scary for me. I liked it a lot! But, to me it was scary and intriguing. Is this what we have to face? Is this what fear is? Do we create it ourselves? Very interesting!
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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2015
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This piece was a bit scary for me. I liked it a lot! But, to me it was scary and intriguing. Is this what we have to face? Is this what fear is? Do we create it ourselves? Very interesting!
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Comment Written 09-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2015
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Many thanks for this thoughtful review. Much appreciated.
Comment from happykat4
Memories haunt, and this is where the ghosts reside. What is your fate. Good flow of poem.
Very descriptive. The ghosts haunt your thoughts. Such pain for the souls of the ghosts. They can't move on , so they terrorise the person. The imagery is large and the reader can picture the haunting.
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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2015
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Memories haunt, and this is where the ghosts reside. What is your fate. Good flow of poem.
Very descriptive. The ghosts haunt your thoughts. Such pain for the souls of the ghosts. They can't move on , so they terrorise the person. The imagery is large and the reader can picture the haunting.
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Comment Written 09-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2015
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Many thanks for this review. Much appreciated.