Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

Fear is a hard think to fight, especially if it is unfounded. These days it is hard with all the bad things in the world not to be fearful, but if we let this fear rule our lives then they have won. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Thanks for best wishes.

Comment from Jackreese

Excellent

I liked this piece. I liked the comparison between living with cancer and living in the world today. I am interested in reading more of your work. I think you did a really good job. Thank you for this!

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 Comment Written 09-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Thanks for your complement.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

The message of this poem expresses the fear many of us have when we see what is going on in our word, You effectively used the 3 words in the poem. Good luck in the contest.
One thing the red on the black is a little hard for the visually challenged, if you want the red on the black you might consider making the text bold which may help some readers.

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 Comment Written 09-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Thanks for the tip.