Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I have to say that this made me laugh. Very well penned.
We have all been there. The visitor who never takes the hint, much like the reviewer who rambles on and stops talking about the poem...

Bye

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 Comment Written 11-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015

Thanks LOL ... :-)

Comment from fayesh

Excellent

I enjoyed your 2-10-2 poem. It flowed well and the message is universal. I like the subtle change in meaning in the word "Welcome" from the first line to the last.

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 Comment Written 11-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015

thanks so much.. :-)