Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

love your painting

your words allow the reader to see and feel the image of the painting

good visual to portray this message

flows well easy read

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2015

Thanks Faye,
I appreciate this fine review and it is a bonus that you enjoyed the painting as well.
:-) Carolyn

reply by Smoothiecool on 16-Jan-2015

most welcome my friend
have a blessed day ....SC <:> Faye (*:*)

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Carolyn; I dearly love the picture and it's so immensely represents the poem so well.
But even without a your imagery is truly gifted in the area of being demonstratively descriptive and exquisitely expressive in imagining is you have written fog as thick as soup or something similar as you described it has the air. All throughout the poem your imagery was quite delightful. Thank you for painting a picture in my mind throughout the poem and your imagination is truly resourceful in the way that you are infected and ingeniously creative with your imagination. .Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2015

Thank you Alex for this fantastic review. I am so delighted you felt the essence of the poem. ;-) Carolyn

reply by krys123 on 16-Jan-2015

You are so welcome Carolyn.

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

What a great acrostic...especially since I didn't realize it was one til I saw the description afterwards...I love the details here, and your foggy colors are awesome!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015

Thanks so much Irish Rain, :-) Carolyn

Comment from kentuckywoman53

Exceptional

Your words so accurately describe the beautiful seascape you created on canvas. Not only did I feel the chill of the early morning fog, but I also relate to the description of how it clings to the lower atmosphere.Your inclusion of the seagulls and the smell of rotting flesh made your poem even more vivid. Well done!!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015

Thanks dear Millie for your wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed the write and the picture. In recently painted a series of seascapes, it was a very calming project.
Love you, the shining six is awesome.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Foggy morning on the bay, indeed that's a wonderful expressed poem, nice in form, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you, Hugs! lakeport.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015

Thanks E for this wonderful review. Hugs back to you, :-) Carolyn

reply by lakeport on 13-Jan-2015

you are very welcome,Hugs!lakeport.

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is an interesting poem from the author. I love to read about the sea and stories of sea shores and inlets and bays. Well done. I think you have caught the essence if thus one nicely.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015

Thanks Tom, I am always happy to read your reviews.
:-) Carolyn

reply by Tomes Johnston on 14-Jan-2015

Good news.

Comment from Bobbi22

Excellent

Very descriptive imagery in your acrostic poem. I don't see/hear the near rhyme as stated in your description - not a problem, just thought you might want to revise your description. Very well written with beautiful artwork as added enhancement. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015

Thanks so very much for your comments and positive thoughts about the poem and the picture. Both were a pleasure to do. I will stake a look at the description. Sounds like I changed in mid-stream, :-) Carolyn

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Carolyn, I really like your lovely poem. Your picture is beautiful and goes so well with your poem. You have described a foggy morning well. I have painted a few pictures in oil. Want to do more. :>D Miss Sally

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015

Hi there,
I find both writing and painting ego be so relaxing. Thanks for the great comments. Keep painting, I work with oils and acrylics. And enjoy both.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

you are not only an exceptional poet but, a talented artist as well. Yesterday was very foggy, dreary and down right nasty. I can relate to your excellent poem. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015

Thanks V
So glad you liked both the poem and the picture. Other writers use their own, I am a little slow. It took me a while to figure it out. LOL e..I pray you are feeling better my friend.
:-) C arolyn

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,

This is another nice poem. You are so good at writing different kinds. So this is your painting. It's nice. I've done some acrylics on canvas too. It was fun when I was painting, but it seemed that the more I painted the worse they were getting . . . so I quit.

Kat

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015

Dear Kat,
Sometimes I work too hard at a painting. When I find that happening I leave it and go to something else. I enjoyed the ones you shared. You gave me courage to display my own.
thank you for this wonderful review.
Love,