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The Heart of Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 96 "Warped motivation"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from Tomes Johnston
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This is yet another anti-terror poem from the author and I applaud it once again. We must stand up to these kind of terror attacks. The aim of terrorism is to terrorise. We must not let them terrorise us. We must carry on as usual and fight this evil ideology. Well done yet again.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015
    Thanks Tom, I wanted to participate in this as a stand against such senseless killing. Glad you thought it was appropriate for the challenge.
    :-) Carolyn
reply by Tomes Johnston on 10-Jan-2015
    I did indeed.
Comment from Walu Feral
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Another well said little piece. I can not believe that these cowards just simply kill innocent people as is they were flies! It is just so sad. People like us, writers mate writers. Cheers Fez

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015
    Made me sick to my stomach. Thank you Fez for your fine words.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from country ranch writer
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THE WAY THE WORLD IS TODAY AND ALL THAT IS GOING ON IN IT something has to give or we all will be in a world of hurt killing each other off.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015
    It is hard to believe these young people can think they are doing what is right. Killing senselessly. No feelings for humankind.
    Thanks so much for your comments and generous rating. :-) Carolyn
reply by country ranch writer on 10-Jan-2015
    welcome
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Indeed, brainwashed is a good way to put it. They have to, to do the evil they carry out.

I would not travel to another country nowadays. I'm chicken!

Another well written 5.7.5.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015
    I am inclined to feel that way myself. I went to Ukraine in 1994, I feel so sorry for those people. There were times even then it felt a little unsafe. But I loved the country and the people were wonderful. You are right I am reluctant to travel as much as I use too.
    This reign of terrorism has to stop, but I don't know where. It is getting bolder and more wide-spread every day.
    Thanks Jax for the comments.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from royowen
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I must admit I've question why they do it, and whatever angle I see, I still don't understand. I know western tourists to Indonesia, the Indonesians are deeply offended by western tourists cavorting, drinking, being semi nude, whether this triggers this or not I don't know, well written, well done, Carolyn, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015
    I have no idea, I just know it is wrong. We will always have wars, but fight, don't sneak around and harm innocent people. And they are getting so bold. I know the Boston marathon and 911 can bring you to your knees. Australia, France, none are exempt. I am just a kindness freak I guess, but I will never understand bullies of any caliber.
    Love you, Be safe, I wrote another one from a different angle.
    :-) Carolyn
reply by royowen on 09-Jan-2015
    Me too, you too, dear friend,
Comment from l.raven
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HI Carolyn, it is unfortunate that people are not listening...and in the other worlds I believe people are brainwashed...they do know the difference...they are raised for babies to be evil...so very sad...very well written ...love ya you...luff Linda xxoo

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015
    You are so right, can you imagine, and all of us start out as sweet, innocent babies, something evil is taught along the way.
    Love you too Linda, Carolyn
reply by l.raven on 09-Jan-2015
    yes it is Carolyn...so sad...xxoo
reply by l.raven on 09-Jan-2015
    yes it is Carolyn...so sad...xxoo
Comment from Spitfire
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One of the better ones. Excellent word choice to describe the state of mind: warped, brain-washed, cowards. Good use of alliteration with motivation and murderers

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015
    Thanks Shari,
    They must be some real nut cases to think this is something they ought to be doing. If its war, then fight, but terrorist acts are way below the belt, as my dad would say.
    :-) Carolyn