Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Lol it took me a couple of minutes as I was stumped as I couldn't see the pun but then it suddenly hit me!! Very punny/funny. Good luck.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

Thanks, Wendyanne. A "thinking man's" (or woman's, as the case were) 5-7-5 -- espically a witty animal one -- is not an easy thing to create...but it can be done, LOL. At least, that's what I've tried so desperately to do here.

Thanks so much for your words of encouragement. I'm very happy the "light bulb" clicked on, so to speak. Hah-hah...

I sincerely appreciate you review. :}

Comment from Lovinia

Excellent

Hi Mystery Writer

I've had a chuckle and enjoyed your funny punny poem. Great rhyming, enjoyed the alliteration, "little/lost", "stumped/such" and the consonance of 's' to provide such wonderful cadence. Sounds vibrant read aloud. Excellent wit. Such a cute little frog. A fine entry and I wish you all the best in the contest. Warm Regards - Lovinia xoxo

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, Lovi. I really appreciate the R&R, and well wishes for the contest. :)

reply by Lovinia on 24-Nov-2014

Hmmmmmm ... it's difficult for me to know who you are mystery wrier. lol I hope I'm around for the vote. Just love cute little froggies ... I've just got to stop kissing them! :)))
Good luck. :)))

reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

Hey, you know what they say. For every frog out there, there is also a prince, LOL...

Thanks again! :}

reply by Lovinia on 24-Nov-2014

Not sure about that .... I think 'they' may be wrong! :)

Perhaps I should feed them chocolate? ....

reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

Hey...that could work!?

reply by Lovinia on 24-Nov-2014

Hershey kisses. :)))

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Nice witty animal 5-7-5 for the prompt. Nice end rhymes. Perfect line and syllable count. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

Thanks, Teresa. I hope it was "witty" enough, LOL...

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This has a couple of good puns: "stumped" and "in a fog". The picture is appealing of the little lost frog. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

Oh, thank heavens there's someone out there who "gets it!"

For that, I thank you immensely, Jeanie Mercer, LOL...

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

the humor in t. The poem is well written. They way you have presented this is subtle . I like the rhyme, too, Nicely done contest entry.

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 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

Thnx, RYME4U, I am glad ya' liked it. Your review, much appreciated, have a good 1...

reply by RYME4U on 24-Nov-2014

Sorry the review was jumbled up. It is a very nice poem

reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

No worries. :}

Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

Your authors notes add a lot of fun to this little write.. I thought it to be an excellent entry, very witty indeed. Good luck to you in this contest!

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 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

Thanks, Dawny. I had author's notes? Oh... yeah, now I recall.

I'd almost forgotten, LOL...Thanks, and have a Happy Thanksgiving! :}