Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

Oh, this is a delightful haiku ...Though, believe pumpkin, surprising, to most people, to learn that it is actually a fruit, & really isn't a vegetable. Though, even so thought it was a good one for the Autumn & Halloween season...And, yes, October frost where I reside is almost upon us.

Caressa

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014

Some consider it both, so that's what I'm going with. :) Thank you for the wonderful review.

Comment from Acquired Taste

Excellent

Seems it could be the advertisement for a "Halloween 32" movie...spooky photo - your phrase pumpkin grins almost brings it to life. Must be be tonight! AT=/

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014

Thank you for this interesting review! I glad you like Halloween and grinning pumpkins

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your syllable count within the contest guidelines

your few words portrays the image well of the end of the season for the pumpkin as Halloween gets a smile

great satori

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014

I'm so glad you liked the satori! Thank you for the review.

reply by Smoothiecool on 19-Oct-2014

welcome ..SC

Comment from mauial

Excellent

I don't think a pumpkin is a vegetable. According to available information it is a fruit. Other than that I thought this was really good.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

Actually, it is a squash mix. None the less, thank you for the review.

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Well, this looks good for the contest. I like the way you ended it. PUMPKIN GRINS. Like maybe he put one over on nature. :>D Miss Sally

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

Thank you, Miss Sally

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

The picture you selected is the perfect complement to your words. I admired your tiny haiku as a salute to Halloween. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

Thank you, Joan

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Pumpkin grins...it knows the Halloween fun begins...after harvest's end

This is a fun fun time of year...where we over eat til we spew

Well done...

God bless

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

Thank you

Comment from giovannimariatommaso

Excellent

13 syllable frost Haiku personified. A clever poem for Halloween, frost, October, & pumpkins w/ a great toothless smile. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

Thank you

reply by giovannimariatommaso on 18-Oct-2014

Y/W GMT

Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

In truth, the October frost aids greatly in the fall harvest as it kills the weeds in the way of the desired crop.. Well done with your entry, Buck

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

Thank you, Buck, and thank you for the information.

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

For us southern hemisphereans an October frost is usually a nasty surprise, well into spring - better hope any new tomato plants and tender peach blossoms are protected!

Your haiku makes a clever connection between the season and Halloween.

Good luck.

Steve

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

Thank you, Steve