Comment from risktaker

Excellent

I like the imagery and the vivid picture of rain cleansing a dry , desolate area. I can see the water carrying the debris, and the travelers on the road being flooded, or swept off the roadway. God controls the weather and he can create a river in a desert at will. Rain is always released from clouds, the amount and intensity is determined by God. Thanks

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014

Thank you for your review and kind words.

reply by risktaker on 19-Sep-2014

ok

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

Indeed, in the desert, we may not get rain often, but a gully washer is a great depiction.

Good poem. Good presentation. Good luck in the contest

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*>*)


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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014

Thank you for your review and kind words. I appreciate both.

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

I really enjoyed this it's very moving I really enjoyed this it's very moving to read and it flowed very smoothly
gully washer--- clever!

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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014

Thank you for your kind review.