Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 72 "(3-5-3) he danced me"The clue is in the title!
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Comment from ProSongwriter
Hi!
I thoroughly enjoyed these few words! I, too, love to dance, particularly waltz. How sweetly you conveyed the romance dancing can invoke! Not often do sop few words put such a smile on my face ... these words did! Simply elegant and wonderful! Best to you and best of luck in the contest. reads like a winner to me!
Alan
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Hi!
I thoroughly enjoyed these few words! I, too, love to dance, particularly waltz. How sweetly you conveyed the romance dancing can invoke! Not often do sop few words put such a smile on my face ... these words did! Simply elegant and wonderful! Best to you and best of luck in the contest. reads like a winner to me!
Alan
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Hi Alan :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! I'm also very appreciative of that lovely 6 star award you gave - THANKS!! Kindest regards...:)
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You're very welcome ...it was my pleasure. All 6 stars were honestly earned. Best to you ...
Alan
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Great piece. I love it. I like the black/white image too. I would not change anything. All the criteria was met. Good job and good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Great piece. I love it. I like the black/white image too. I would not change anything. All the criteria was met. Good job and good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Hi jannypan :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Eric1
Hi, This is a great little 5-7-5, conjuring up memories of my Mum and Dad doing the' Back kitchen Waltz' as they called it. Good luck in the contest my friend.
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Hi, This is a great little 5-7-5, conjuring up memories of my Mum and Dad doing the' Back kitchen Waltz' as they called it. Good luck in the contest my friend.
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Hi Eric :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Glad to bring back pleasant memories for you :) Kindest regards...
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You are very welcome my friend