To Cherish Thorns
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "No Particular Day"Free Verse Poetry
16 total reviews
Comment from Kaila Mari
The reality of your words is stunning!
This is a well written poem. It conveys the authors message clearly. It grabs the reader and presents great imagery not only in the written word but the artwork used. Great job.
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The reality of your words is stunning!
This is a well written poem. It conveys the authors message clearly. It grabs the reader and presents great imagery not only in the written word but the artwork used. Great job.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
Comment from kukarad70
Dear Author,
This is a very painful poem in the absence of lover. No lover, no value of life whatever is there. No interest of live in this world. Nothing is better without you.
Your poem is mixture of great wordings, style, presentation and heart-touching message. Thanks and regards. Kamal
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Dear Author,
This is a very painful poem in the absence of lover. No lover, no value of life whatever is there. No interest of live in this world. Nothing is better without you.
Your poem is mixture of great wordings, style, presentation and heart-touching message. Thanks and regards. Kamal
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
Comment from c_lucas
This is a strong contender for your contest. It is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a captivating read. Good job.
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This is a strong contender for your contest. It is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a captivating read. Good job.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
Comment from TAB_that's me
The hurt must be so deep for one to commit suicide. This is a well written poem for the final words prompt. Good luck to you.
teresa
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The hurt must be so deep for one to commit suicide. This is a well written poem for the final words prompt. Good luck to you.
teresa
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
Very intense, personal, with the images floating off the page, with the words, with the life that is ending.
Correct spelling:
with southing waters of logical lotion [soothing]
Good job.
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Very intense, personal, with the images floating off the page, with the words, with the life that is ending.
Correct spelling:
with southing waters of logical lotion [soothing]
Good job.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
Comment from DerivedBetter
I just love the way you shaped the poem with the words. This poem made a powerful impact. Thanks for sharing. Do keep on writing you have real talent.
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I just love the way you shaped the poem with the words. This poem made a powerful impact. Thanks for sharing. Do keep on writing you have real talent.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014