Clocks stand motionless
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a well-penned poem, it is happy they had forty tears together, but it is sad one has to go on alone. Thanks you, for sharing this,my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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This is a well-penned poem, it is happy they had forty tears together, but it is sad one has to go on alone. Thanks you, for sharing this,my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you Debbie
Comment from misscookie
The artwork you choose is awesome. It truly sets the mood.
Your poem is heartfelt by many I'm sure .
Losing a love one after so many years. I can relate. Yet God keep us here for a reason and one days it will be our season to be with our love ones.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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The artwork you choose is awesome. It truly sets the mood.
Your poem is heartfelt by many I'm sure .
Losing a love one after so many years. I can relate. Yet God keep us here for a reason and one days it will be our season to be with our love ones.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you
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You're very welcome. Until next time
Cookie
Comment from lynglyng
You do an excellent job of capturing the readers emotions! This is excellently written in my opinion. There is nothing that needs to be changed. Thanks for sharing, LyngLyng
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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You do an excellent job of capturing the readers emotions! This is excellently written in my opinion. There is nothing that needs to be changed. Thanks for sharing, LyngLyng
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you for this Lyn
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A short but meaningful message in this poem. Good read - the tone puts me in mind of W H Auden's 'Stop All The Clocks' - enjoyed the read. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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A short but meaningful message in this poem. Good read - the tone puts me in mind of W H Auden's 'Stop All The Clocks' - enjoyed the read. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you Dorothy
Comment from Jackarrie
A very beautiful poem written about the loss of a partner after 60 years of marriage. I do not think this is biographical, but it is a painful reality for so many at the present time.
Well written
Well done
Mary
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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A very beautiful poem written about the loss of a partner after 60 years of marriage. I do not think this is biographical, but it is a painful reality for so many at the present time.
Well written
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you Mary
Comment from BCScot
A strong piece that is effective and powerful without being too strong. I love the picture and the questions you ask. I was moved and feel strongly about this as my mother is about to lose my dad, no real easy answers. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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A strong piece that is effective and powerful without being too strong. I love the picture and the questions you ask. I was moved and feel strongly about this as my mother is about to lose my dad, no real easy answers. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from MM lives on :)
Hello poet, yes the time clicks and where do we go from there... Sixty years of marriage I just lost my wife. 60 years is a milestone let alone 10. great poem!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Hello poet, yes the time clicks and where do we go from there... Sixty years of marriage I just lost my wife. 60 years is a milestone let alone 10. great poem!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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thank you for this and sorry for your loss
Comment from Aussie
My condolences for the loss of your life partner; your presentation was beautiful. There are no words to mend your heart, only thoughts and memories for you to ponder. Tis a pity we can't go together - still a parting happens to each and every one of us. Be assured you will see her again.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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My condolences for the loss of your life partner; your presentation was beautiful. There are no words to mend your heart, only thoughts and memories for you to ponder. Tis a pity we can't go together - still a parting happens to each and every one of us. Be assured you will see her again.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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thank you Aussie
Comment from DerivedBetter
Very powerful message here. Very well thought out and powerfully conveyed. I never know when I read something like this if it is truth our just very empathetic fiction. Nicely done. Keep on living to share that gift of writing.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Very powerful message here. Very well thought out and powerfully conveyed. I never know when I read something like this if it is truth our just very empathetic fiction. Nicely done. Keep on living to share that gift of writing.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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thank you for this
Comment from judiverse
You do a superb job of showing the emotion experienced after the loss of the wife of 60 years. That is a wonderful history of years spent together. "Clocks stand still" is a wonderful phrase. You will always remember the moment of her passing, and time does stand still. This flows beautifully. There is a sense of dignity about the rhythm. Although filled with grief, the narrator seems reconciled to the loss. judi
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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You do a superb job of showing the emotion experienced after the loss of the wife of 60 years. That is a wonderful history of years spent together. "Clocks stand still" is a wonderful phrase. You will always remember the moment of her passing, and time does stand still. This flows beautifully. There is a sense of dignity about the rhythm. Although filled with grief, the narrator seems reconciled to the loss. judi
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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thank you Judi
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You're welcome. Beautifully written. judi