Mouser
an eight line ghost poem12 total reviews
Comment from Eric1
Wonderful little eight liner ghost story for this competition my friend, it flows very smoothly, has a great rhyming scheme and a wonderful rhythm. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Wonderful little eight liner ghost story for this competition my friend, it flows very smoothly, has a great rhyming scheme and a wonderful rhythm. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Eric, for the excellent review.
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You are welcome my friend.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Ghost poem with a difference since the ghosts are mice and it is the cat Mauzer who is haunted - quite a comical thought, but not for poor old Mauzer I suppose.
Unusual rhyme scheme you use here.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Ghost poem with a difference since the ghosts are mice and it is the cat Mauzer who is haunted - quite a comical thought, but not for poor old Mauzer I suppose.
Unusual rhyme scheme you use here.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Steve, for the excellent review.