Is Your Life like Mine?
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Comment from royowen
A very surprising conclusion to this short version of 100 word story contest entry! I enjoyed the cleverness of you narrative, and the photo of the amply endowed young lady! Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
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A very surprising conclusion to this short version of 100 word story contest entry! I enjoyed the cleverness of you narrative, and the photo of the amply endowed young lady! Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
Comment from Acquired Taste
I truly enjoy 100 word story prompts. So much information, so many emotions, so many paths to redemption or destruction in 100 words.....
The aftermath of a night of drunken debauchery - lost job - new wife or girlfriend or boyfriend - pretty much the average for a quart of bourbon! AT=/
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I truly enjoy 100 word story prompts. So much information, so many emotions, so many paths to redemption or destruction in 100 words.....
The aftermath of a night of drunken debauchery - lost job - new wife or girlfriend or boyfriend - pretty much the average for a quart of bourbon! AT=/
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
Comment from Charlene0513
Quite the surprise to be greeted with, first thing in the morning. She lost no time in the awesome dilemma as he finds her stark-raving body the object of lust.
Good simile: A wave of dizziness hit me like a rock
Very well written in so few a words.
Charlene
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Quite the surprise to be greeted with, first thing in the morning. She lost no time in the awesome dilemma as he finds her stark-raving body the object of lust.
Good simile: A wave of dizziness hit me like a rock
Very well written in so few a words.
Charlene
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014