The Newspaper
She took his newspaper23 total reviews
Comment from Cajungirl
Great job, i just wonder who got the better deal. LOL
Excellent story, this is a great response to the writing prompt. A complete, well-written 100 word story. Best of luck in the contest.
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Great job, i just wonder who got the better deal. LOL
Excellent story, this is a great response to the writing prompt. A complete, well-written 100 word story. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
Comment from livelylinda
Author: a cute short story and you have surprised me with the last line. I kept waiting for a twist to the story and thought, oh, there are only a few words left, must not be a surprise. . .then you surprised me! Good write and good luck with the contest. livelylinda
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Author: a cute short story and you have surprised me with the last line. I kept waiting for a twist to the story and thought, oh, there are only a few words left, must not be a surprise. . .then you surprised me! Good write and good luck with the contest. livelylinda
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
Comment from NurseBarb
I've never actually kissed a stranger like that but I've seen it in movies and if the opportunity ever presented itself (prior to being married), I think I would go with it, especially if he's handsome and smells good as you describe in your story. Excellent story and believable which makes it even better.
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I've never actually kissed a stranger like that but I've seen it in movies and if the opportunity ever presented itself (prior to being married), I think I would go with it, especially if he's handsome and smells good as you describe in your story. Excellent story and believable which makes it even better.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
Comment from Karen B.
I guess that was a reasonable trade. :) Well written story in 100 words and a great entry into the contest. Good luck with it!
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I guess that was a reasonable trade. :) Well written story in 100 words and a great entry into the contest. Good luck with it!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
Comment from Twonunsandachimp
It was a good story and you set up the story rather well with the 100 word limits. Would like to see what you can do with this story with more words. Good luck on the contest.
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It was a good story and you set up the story rather well with the 100 word limits. Would like to see what you can do with this story with more words. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your well penned words and vivid images tells the story of the exchange of the newspaper for a kiss on a flight to Brazil
well portrayed
cheers..smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest
your well penned words and vivid images tells the story of the exchange of the newspaper for a kiss on a flight to Brazil
well portrayed
cheers..smoothiecool
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
So they kissed at the start of a long flight, and now they have to sit together after that? LOL! Should make for a verrry interesting trip! LOL! Good job!
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So they kissed at the start of a long flight, and now they have to sit together after that? LOL! Should make for a verrry interesting trip! LOL! Good job!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
Comment from RodG
Now this is quintessential romantic comedy fantasy! I can easily see this scene on the screen. I am amazed how much characterization of both the paper owner and the paper borrower you were able to achieve in just 100 words.
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Now this is quintessential romantic comedy fantasy! I can easily see this scene on the screen. I am amazed how much characterization of both the paper owner and the paper borrower you were able to achieve in just 100 words.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
Comment from highlander104
Cute story and ever soooo romantic. It's a good thing she liked him, 'cause it's a long way to Brazil sitting next to each other. Good luck in the contest.
Jean K.
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Cute story and ever soooo romantic. It's a good thing she liked him, 'cause it's a long way to Brazil sitting next to each other. Good luck in the contest.
Jean K.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Positively refreshing and original. The power of presence exudes flirtation through the use of the setting of an airplane, the scent of the man and the newspaper. Upon building a bridge between them, the effort culminating in a kiss was very well done. Out of 6's..drat!! Good luck.
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Positively refreshing and original. The power of presence exudes flirtation through the use of the setting of an airplane, the scent of the man and the newspaper. Upon building a bridge between them, the effort culminating in a kiss was very well done. Out of 6's..drat!! Good luck.
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2014