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The Heart of Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 55 "5-7-5 Undoubtable faith"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from Witwoo
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Oh, how I love a good poem about spirituality. I like the brightness of the background, which lent some excitement or even joy to the picture and the Haiku. Well done today.



WW

 Comment Written 07-May-2014


reply by the author on 07-May-2014
    I appreciate your fine comments
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi

What a wonderful tribute your dad! Thx for sharing the family pix - the best kind of art. So few words allowed but they pack a wallop.

Well done - good luck in the contest.

Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax

 Comment Written 07-May-2014


reply by the author on 07-May-2014
    Thanks Jax for this great review.
Comment from donette1914
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very sweet of faith and trust and hope a father and son and i love the photo and i felt it was heartfelt and it was a pleasure to read your work

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reply by the author on 07-May-2014
    Thanks donette1914, I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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This is an encouraging message of faith and hope in the promise of the resurrected life. (Note: you have a typo in your title.) Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 07-May-2014


reply by the author on 07-May-2014
    Thanks Jeanie for the comments and the edit, I will fix
Comment from TAB_that's me
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I love the message in your little spiritual 5-7-5 poem. Perfect syllable count. Good luck to you in the contest.
~~teresa~~

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 Comment Written 07-May-2014


reply by the author on 07-May-2014
    Thanks Teresa for the good luck wished, I am glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from akulkumol
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Your definition of trust and hope is really admirable. The angle you have chosen to describe it is really lovely. loved reading it and thanks for sharing. Best wishes for the contest.

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 Comment Written 07-May-2014


reply by the author on 07-May-2014
    Thanks for the kind comments and good wishes. :-)