The Bard of Bel Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "The Heir, Kidnapped, Suspended!"A homeless man sees more than people realize.
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Comment from Nosha17
Great chapter with exciting action and intrigue. I like all the new intricacies of the plot, it was full of suspense and very well written. Most enjoyable as always. Faye
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Great chapter with exciting action and intrigue. I like all the new intricacies of the plot, it was full of suspense and very well written. Most enjoyable as always. Faye
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
Comment from Michaelk
Oh, so the chief really is in on it, not just incompetent. Very nice twist. Bard being kidnapped says that he really did know something. Now that the girls' cover is blown, will they be able to keep this low key, or do they just start gunning for everyone? Good chapter, really moving along.
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Oh, so the chief really is in on it, not just incompetent. Very nice twist. Bard being kidnapped says that he really did know something. Now that the girls' cover is blown, will they be able to keep this low key, or do they just start gunning for everyone? Good chapter, really moving along.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Just as we suspected. The chief is in on it and probably part of the group that took the bard. Quite and interesting twist about Ruby. Another great chapter.
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Just as we suspected. The chief is in on it and probably part of the group that took the bard. Quite and interesting twist about Ruby. Another great chapter.
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow! Graet chapter! Lots of news. Ruby knows who she is now. And they kidnapped the Bard... maybe planning to kill him. I don't think you'll let that happen. And Tenaya told the stupid captain off good. LOL!
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Wow! Graet chapter! Lots of news. Ruby knows who she is now. And they kidnapped the Bard... maybe planning to kill him. I don't think you'll let that happen. And Tenaya told the stupid captain off good. LOL!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
Comment from Sankey
This is getting really good mate. Must be getting some good help is all I can say. I have not given any help just cleaning up your spags ha!
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mom could've (-have) said Abraham Lincoln
into people(')s yards
Anyway, (t)he(y) took him
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This is getting really good mate. Must be getting some good help is all I can say. I have not given any help just cleaning up your spags ha!
Some more...
mom could've (-have) said Abraham Lincoln
into people(')s yards
Anyway, (t)he(y) took him
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2014