Comment from royowen

Excellent

A deeply mysterious muse you have chosen! I liken it to " I spy with my little eye! " I'm not very good at that either! I still think you'll do well in this difficult poetic discipline! Great art work! Well done, good luck, Roy.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

Comment from MagKing

Excellent

Find me
I hide deep in spring's first warm fragrant breath
Hold me.

I don't really get this poem, mind explaining, please?

MagKing

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

Comment from Judd7

Excellent

Yes it has the magic of real love. There is a wonderfulness of the connection between love and nature. I remember meeting in the woods. How nature heightened everything. Thanks for this..................Q

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Yep, I know all about spring fever. Our snow is still melting, and I can't wait for it to be gone so I can start planting. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

2/10/2 - are they seriously going to use every possible syllable number combination that can be found? LOL
I like the emotion in the imperative statements of find me and hold me
good personification of spring with its fragrant breath
Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Rightful moment. Challenge for the observer. Good wording. The count is there and the idea is right on. Best to you in the contest. Shalom.

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

Comment from daeneam

Excellent

Find me

I hide deep in spring's first warm fragrant breath

Hold me

- too few words but full of emotions and very much appropriate with the contest prompt. I wish you well in the contest!

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014