Comment from tbacha58

Excellent

Shamrocks of me life

A wee bit older

Daughters turn forty-two today

Bless them, a beautiful deep way for a mother to write to celebrate the birthday of her daughters. The picture is amazing to. Hugs Terry xoxo

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014

Thanks Terry, I haven't heard from you in a while. (Although I am way behind ) Hope you are doing well.

reply by tbacha58 on 18-Mar-2014

I am visiting my 2 boys in the US since 2 months, and will remain here 3 more months, before I head back to Canada. I also missed everybody here. Much love Terry xoxo

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

What a beautiful way to celebrate St Patrick's Day. LOL

I enjoyed the poem, please wish them a happy birthday for me. I also loved the artwork.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014

And I loved your review. Thanks so much. I think they had fun today. Even though they weren't together, each had a good report.

reply by Cajungirl on 18-Mar-2014

I am glad to hear that.

Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

How awesome Carolyn! What a treasure you received on St. Patrick's day. Not one but two pots of gold that can't be placed in numerical value. An excellent poem.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Thanks NicciFaye, for this wonderful review of Twin Shamrocks. They have been a double blessing. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Oh, I wish you could have posted a picture. I love the idea of twins. Nice use of alliteration with turn, two, today. Assonance with me and we.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

They are cuties, even at 42. Size 5, 2 kiddos each. I appreciate the professional comments regarding alliteration and assonance. It is nice to receive affirmation of good work. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Rosalyne

Excellent

Hi, Carolyn.
Happy birthday to Stephanie and Suzanne. Wow, what a day to be born, "the luck of the Irish." Happy Paddy's Day! Your poem is wonderful and such a nice gift to share with your kids.
Bye
Rosalyne :)

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Thank you, I enjoyed your review so much. It was a great day and a very 'busy' baby life there-after. I don't know what Mommies do with more than that at a time. :-) Carolyn

Comment from jmdg1954

Exceptional

Shamrocks of me life
A wee bit older
Daughters turn forty-two today

I didn't know you had twins. Now that I do, this is the perfect poem to celebrate with them. Hopefully they are near-by so you can see them. My three are dispersed further away, and that stinks.

Awesomely done... John

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Hi there, they are close by. 3 and 12 miles respectively. Each have 2 children. Suzanne has a son and daughter and Stephanie has 2 daughters. They are sweet women. Larry and I blended a family , he brought 2 sons, they each have 2. How sweet is that? Tony lives(twin boy and girl) in Tennessee, and Durl (2 daughters)is in Arizona. I am blessed. John, I can't thank you enough for your loyal support and encouragement as well as the awesome stars. Love, Carolyn

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Carolyn, or the best of congratulations for your daughters and I guess they must be twins. I found your poem very appropriate for St. Paddy's day. I found out today it's not pronounced Paddy with T's in it. Thanks much for sharing and posting and may you always find peace wherever you are.
Alex

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Thanks Alex, yes they are twins, St 'Paddy's Day babies.' Glad you liked the poem , your comments always mean a lot to me.
:-) Carolyn

reply by krys123 on 17-Mar-2014

Carolyn, what a coincidence having twins born on St. Paddy's day. And also you are so entirely and sincerely welcome.
Alex

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Oh how precious. I just love the picture. Guess cause I'm Irish! Love the comment 'Shamrocks of me life'. Nice one, Carolyn. Thanks for sharing. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

I am delighted you liked the poem and the picture. So you are Irish, I guess I am too, at least once a year. 'Top of the mornin' to ye.' :-) Carolyn

Comment from Sylvia Page

Excellent

Carolyn congratulations to you and a happy birthday to your twins Stephanie and Suzanne.
Carolyn, you need to change the order of the lines to make it a 5/7/5
Shamrocks of me life /5
A wee bit older /5
Daughters turn forty-two today /8
5 stars as I know your poetic skills will correct this.
Blessings,
Sylvia

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Hi there and thanks, I don't know where my brain was. I think it will be easier just to leave it but not call it a 5-7-5, as it is surely not. Funny thing is I counted 'til I was blind. LOL
Love you, Carolyn

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

We now have a 5-5-8, how do you register a new poem form. Love.

reply by Sylvia Page on 17-Mar-2014

Try this...
Shamrocks of me life /5
Twins turn forty-two today /7
A wee bit older /5

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014

That would have worked well too. thank you my friend.

Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Excellent

Congratulations to your twin daughters Carolyn! You have used a lovely picture to accompany your poem on this St Patrick's day. Nicely done!

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Thanks Sarah, I appreciate your great review. I am letting them know how many Birthday wishes they have had from all over our FS world. :-) Carolyn