Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

Ine, this is so good! Very different - I love the way you've repeated some of the lines. It adds real emphasis to the read.

I just noticed a couple ow things:

time to crie, - cry

And I keep wonder why - And I keep wondering why



Av

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday, Ine

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

am not pretending to understand all the thoughts behind this write, but fully understand its sentiment and to which none can answer except you. Yet, I still feel, there is much to go on with and the will must be strong because there is usually a way.
I guess it is in the believing.
Best wishes,
RG

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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Comment from amada

Excellent

Delightful work in this Fool. A song lyric but it's adaptable to everyday life as well. A marvelous sense of humor. I like it.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Ine, some times you just wonder why...and we keep fooling ourselves about one thing or other...your poem is very well written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by l.raven on 09-Mar-2014

you are so welcome..xxoo

Comment from Marillion

Excellent

Hi Ine-

I like this one, my friend, and can't recall if I've seen song lyrics from you before.

There's no time and place for everything,
time to crie, (cry)
time to dream,
there's time to wait
But there's no time to waste no

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hi Robin what a great beat to you poem I like the question here is my quick response

You are a star of the "Universe"
A star that is bright
You are you
You are yourself
No one else
Stay the way you are
Be and stay what you are.
NO one else.

Gert

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

You express very well the title of your poem, the repetition works very
well, it goes on and on yet not getting anywhere...
Good style , good choice of picture. Pili

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by Pili Pubul on 09-Mar-2014

You are very welcome. Enjoy your Sunday. Pili

Comment from Janie King

Excellent

There are often many times in our lives when our minds just runs around in circles and can't seemingly find a satisfactory answer. Good job. God loves you and I do too.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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Comment from DALLAS01

Excellent

This has a definite beat. Would be interesting put to music. It has almost a manic rhythm that captures the frustration. Nice art work.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by DALLAS01 on 08-Mar-2014

You're welcome. You too.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, robina, you did an excellent job writing this song about letting others worry about things while you enjoy the things this life has to offer. I enjoyed reading it

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday, Ine