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Monty and Molly Fall in Love

This is how it all began!

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Comment from Jacq77
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This is so clever, and I am sure both children and adults will love it. The delightful artwork drew me in, and your words did not disappoint. Your poem told a lovely story, rhymed well, and was a pleasure to read. Good one!

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
    Thank you so much, Jacq, for your lovely review, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! :) xsx Sandra
Comment from Selina Stambi
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Oh-h-h ... just lovely, and me smiling all the way!

I read this and remembered why I became your fan in the first place, Sandra.

The animal-y tales are your REAL sweet spot, my lovely friend.

Hugs to you and hope your day is full of His sweet, comforting presence.

xxx

Sonali :)

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
    Thank you so much my dear, dear friend, I am so pleased you liked this one, it's been a while since I last did a Hedgerow poem, I just thought it would be a good way back into writing. I know He is watching over me, and I know mum is close by too. :) I will get there in time. xsx Sandra
Comment from N.K. Wagner
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A perfect Valentine story for all your fans, Sandra. I enjoy your excellent three-couplet verses. They move the action effortlessly while we enjoy the rhymes. Well done. :) Nancy

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
    Thank you, Nancy, so very much! I am so pleased you enjoyed it. I really must start writing some more of them, it's been a while. I hope you are well, my friend. :) Sandra
Comment from Dirus
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Hi there,

nice job on this one. good one for the holidays. All grammar looks good. Nice choice of words on this poem keep up the good work. Thank you for the good read. Also I liked the picture. :)

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
    Thank you so much, Dirus, I am so pleased you liked it! :) Sandra
Comment from Debra White
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Hi Sandra :) This is so lovely. I'm happy that you shared it - it's good to see where it all started - a marvellous mousy romance - can't beat it! I'm going to book mark this one for the kids - they'll love it :) Kindest regards as always, love Debra xx

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    Hi Debra, that is so nice of you, I hope they enjoy it. It was fun writing it, I needed it too. I am going to try and work it into one of the stories. I am really happy you liked it, Debra, you are such a lovely friend. xsx Sandra
Comment from gramalot8
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Sandra... I love reading and writing children's poetry. What a fun, whimsical poem you have given us with this one. I think each child will definitely fall in love with Molly, Monty, Timmy and Tommy. Thanks for sharing their cute story with us.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    Hi Gramalot8, I am so pleased. I love doing it too, guess my brain got stuck down there in my childhood!! Thank you so much for your lovely review. :) Sandra.
Comment from jmdg1954
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I loved it. It was fun to read, told a nice story, the rhyming was impeccable and the flow to the story was smooth and well done.

Personally I'm in awe of the stories that you put out. I wished I had ten percent of your talent and I'd be happy.

Great to read... John

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    Oh my goodness! What an amazing compliment, thank you so much, John. I am so pleased you enjoyed this poem, you always say such nice things, thank you! :) Sandra
Comment from c_lucas
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting Read. There is very good imagery and descriptive read.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    Thank you so much, Charles, for your lovely review! :) Sandra
reply by c_lucas on 17-Feb-2014
    You're welcome, Sandra. Charlie
Comment from kiwijenny
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I love this and kids will love this.....I had a baby mouse made of felt that I kept in a matchbox filled with cotton wool. I loved that tiny thing and cherished it .....this will appeal to kids
God bless

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    What a sweet story, we all have some little pet around, not all of them so nice. My brother kept a worm!! I am so pleased you liked my little poem, thank you so much for your lovely words. :) Sandra
reply by kiwijenny on 17-Feb-2014
    :o) ah there's a story.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    Will I be reading about it!!
Comment from Marillion
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This is a delightful ditty, Sandra, and I love the progression of the story. I think it's simple enough for children, but meaty enough for parents, and that is the perfect combination. Well done! David

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    Thank you so much, David. I have written several story/poems about Timmy and Tommy, and the fun they have with their friends. But now I know where they came from!! I am really pleased you enjoyed it! :) Sandra