Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Excellent

Original entry into the contest. Very nice joining of artwork and creative poem structure. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014

Thanks Sarah, :-) Carolyn

Comment from Sylvia Page

Excellent

A new star is born to invigorate life. I like your lune. It is very well constructed. You have fulfilled all the contest requirements. Good luck in the contest
Cheers,
Sylvia

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014

Thanks Sylvia for your encouraging review. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is stunning! A technically sound Lune with an message that just elevates the reader. A most worthy contest entry and I wish you all the best in the judging. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014

And thank you for this wonderful review. :-) Carolyn

Comment from krys123

Excellent

I like your presentation very much in your poem was written to touch me as it did. The like can be interpreted in many ways one spiritually a one just physically I prefer to myself to look at spiritually. Thank you so much for sharing this with others including myself. May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex
PS: May you have a good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

Thanks Alex for your awesome review and good wishes. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Night is darkness. There is light there is hope.
Avery great idea. We all look for light.
And the soul is light
Well done
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

Hi Benny and thanks for this well thought out review. :-) Carolyn

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I have often wondered how I would feel if I was an astronomer peering into space and witnessed the birth of a new star. This lune describes the experience very well as I am sure my soul would be invigorated.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

I appreciate your insightful remarks RodG, thank you, Carolyn

Comment from AprilShower

Exceptional

Very creative, Carolyn. The picture goes perfect with the poem. The black and gold go well with the poem, too. I see you also made another star with your poem. Well done.

April :o)

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

Thanks April, I am happy you enjoyed the poem and presentation. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Sueellen11

Excellent

Very nicely written,, good entry into the contest great presentation also,, true yo contest requirements,,well done,,good luck,,blessings sueellen

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

And thank you as usual for your wonderful words and encouragement. :-) Carolyn

Comment from The Death

Excellent

Hello,
Excellent presentation and superb wording of a beautiful phenomenon!!

Nice use of internal rhyme in the first line and the flow is fluid.

The lines are abstract and yet connected.

I like the way you thought this out.

I hope it does well in the contest.:)

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

And thought it out I did. LOL thanks for this great review, Short poetry is not necessarily easy poetry. I appreciate you good wishes for the contest. :-) Carolyn

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, carolyn, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful lune poem about the star that lights up the soul. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

Thanks for your wonderful review and good wishes. :-) Carolyn