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The Heart of Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Twilight Cinquain"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
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God just thought of everything by creating the night, when all can quite down and we can rest/recharge for the challenges of the next day. very nice poem/ God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
    Thank you so much Ms Evelyn, I hope you are doing well these days. Love you
Comment from w.j.debi
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Such a peaceful and joyful message. Twilight is a beautiful time of day and you have capture its mood well. Good job with the prompt. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
    Thank you so very much for your kind comments.
Comment from Curly Girly
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Oh, this is so nice...
Calm now

The day is past

Twilight is upon us

Gods' grace of peaceful rest is near

Sleep well

Lovely, soft, peaceful words to soothe the soul and mind.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
    Thanks Nicole for this lovely review.
Comment from l.raven
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Very nicely written...And I love the wording...It is in the night that all is quiet and peace can be heard...Love your and the picture perfect...

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
    I appreciate your great review, glad you liked the poem and the picture.
reply by l.raven on 18-Oct-2013
    Your so welcome...
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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A nice, vivid depiction and portrayal of visual about twilight and how graceful and gift from God it has been, so peaceful and calm, moments for rest and retirement and relaxation and sleep, I enjoyed. 04/1017


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 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
    I am so happy you enjoyed this one. Thank you also for the wonderful rating.