A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "~Angel Face~ A Pictapoem"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
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Comment from marijmd
Ah what a sweet couple! LOL
Although the poem was not the gory visage I was expecting - a broken heart and lost love played within your words.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Ah what a sweet couple! LOL
Although the poem was not the gory visage I was expecting - a broken heart and lost love played within your words.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Hah, thank you, marijmd. I simply was not in a gory mood on that day, LOL...
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Dean,
This poem is delicious in its darkness. Your presentation is amazing and your well chosen verbiage is superb. I wish I had a six to offer you. The picture is creepy but fits your theme perfectly. You have penned a lyrical rhyme and the flow is smooth. Well done...chey
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Hi Dean,
This poem is delicious in its darkness. Your presentation is amazing and your well chosen verbiage is superb. I wish I had a six to offer you. The picture is creepy but fits your theme perfectly. You have penned a lyrical rhyme and the flow is smooth. Well done...chey
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thanks very much, chey. I certainly appreciate your kind comments and thoughts ...
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u r so welcome!
Comment from Hitcher
The fallen are my favorite creatures of darkness,especially those dark seductive ones:)Angel Face pushed all the right buttons of me Dean, loved it...
I have a couple in my book, Incubus and Dark Delirium, below is the opening stanza of Incubus;
He is the master of seduction,
Hell bent on my destruction.
He's my sinful prize with midnight eyes,
I yearn for His corruption.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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The fallen are my favorite creatures of darkness,especially those dark seductive ones:)Angel Face pushed all the right buttons of me Dean, loved it...
I have a couple in my book, Incubus and Dark Delirium, below is the opening stanza of Incubus;
He is the master of seduction,
Hell bent on my destruction.
He's my sinful prize with midnight eyes,
I yearn for His corruption.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Incubus...it sounds great, Hitcher. Is it a published work. If so, is it available here, on Fanstory? I'd certainly like to read it, it sounds like it's definitely in the same vein as my poem.
Thanks for the wonderful review, as well as the heads-up on those two poems.
Comment from SimplyaStudent
Not bad. Are you a Stephen King fan by chance? It would appear we have a similair thought towards angels and the like, but we handle it differently. Good job on the poem... nice and dark. :) SS
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Not bad. Are you a Stephen King fan by chance? It would appear we have a similair thought towards angels and the like, but we handle it differently. Good job on the poem... nice and dark. :) SS
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Yes, I am a huge fan of King. I just finished his book, Stephen King: On Writing, a short time ago. Fantastic tool for aspiring writers, not just of the horror genre, but all genres.
Thanks for your wonderful review!
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Not a King fan really, i aspire to Tolkien, Lewis and Bryan Davis myself. :-) Ss
Comment from Darkhorse555
oh excellent entry angel face like the grand stage just opened as the music played touching upon the heart strings excellent piece dear friend
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oh excellent entry angel face like the grand stage just opened as the music played touching upon the heart strings excellent piece dear friend
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much, Darkhorse555. I really appreciate it, my good friend!
Comment from forestport12
Who said beauty was only skin deep? Mastering the power of the verb, like the use of Baptized ignites all kinds of imagery and emotion with the use of few words around it. But then you use, "My blood in you baptized." You create an original phrasing and unique imagery.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Who said beauty was only skin deep? Mastering the power of the verb, like the use of Baptized ignites all kinds of imagery and emotion with the use of few words around it. But then you use, "My blood in you baptized." You create an original phrasing and unique imagery.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much for your insightful, intelligent review, forestport12. I sincerely appreciate it!
Comment from Aletheia
This is simply awesome. I love the presentation, and it flows perfectly. The last verse is my fav, very creepy. What about Guardian angels? I have a couple of those who have popped up here and there, but when I call upon them they're nowhere to be found.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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This is simply awesome. I love the presentation, and it flows perfectly. The last verse is my fav, very creepy. What about Guardian angels? I have a couple of those who have popped up here and there, but when I call upon them they're nowhere to be found.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thanks, begonia, I appreciate your wonderful review...
They're there, silently watching over you. Never doubt it for a second!
Comment from ravenblack
Well, if that's an angel, I'm going to run at the first sign of feathers. I guess sometimes it pays very well to look a gift horse in the mouth ( popped into my head because angel face almost resembles a horse skull). Chilling piece, truly a blessing in disguise.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Well, if that's an angel, I'm going to run at the first sign of feathers. I guess sometimes it pays very well to look a gift horse in the mouth ( popped into my head because angel face almost resembles a horse skull). Chilling piece, truly a blessing in disguise.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Hah, thanks, RB, I appreciate that!
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Great poem, D-Nuts. A near perfect flow, with a great rhyme scheme. I have been out of the loop for a while, My whole family was sick.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Great poem, D-Nuts. A near perfect flow, with a great rhyme scheme. I have been out of the loop for a while, My whole family was sick.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thanks, 'Sak. Yeah, I noticed you haven't been around for a while. I hope things are better now...
Comment from S A Bullen
I don't have any sixes left. This is wonderful, Dean. Beautifully rhymed and flows as gently as a leaf in the current. Seduced by an angel in disguise or you as the fallen angel wearing the mask disguised. I can see it both ways. It is a wonderful poem. Sheryn :-)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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I don't have any sixes left. This is wonderful, Dean. Beautifully rhymed and flows as gently as a leaf in the current. Seduced by an angel in disguise or you as the fallen angel wearing the mask disguised. I can see it both ways. It is a wonderful poem. Sheryn :-)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thanks, Sheryn, and I'm very glad that you picked up on the dual meaning here. I'm very grateful...