Comment from Rmocruz

Excellent

I find this western ghost theme to be solidly rhymed and entertaining.
Your visual-art selection is appropriate to complement your written word.
A well crafted contest entry.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

reply by Rmocruz on 31-Oct-2019

My pleasure Cindy!

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Halloween Poetry contest.
This is a fun old version of Halloween and cowboys.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed my Halloween cowboy story-poem.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

This is a great story poem. Well-written, interesting start to finish. Very realistic. I imagine being locked up with the ghosts was probably worse than jail, lol. Great job, thank you for reviving it.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019

Thanks. Yeah, I think I'd rather go to jail too.

Comment from Barbaraj1

Exceptional

Great holiday poem. You were very creative in your poem. I don't think
I have read about a cowboy's Halloween. Also, I love your rhyming.
Good job on the story.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019

Thanks! I think Jerry Jing-Jang is one of a kind. His other adventures are available in my portfolio if you're interested.

Comment from Bichon

Excellent

Oh wow, a very interesting poem. I love how there is a story embedded in it, it really made for a great and captivating read. Best of luck in the contest

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019

Thanks. Jerry Jing-Jang is so much fun to write.

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello Cindy. This is a really well conceived and well written poem. I enjoy the poem because it is a complete story. I believe every poem should have a beginning a middle and an end , and should tell a story. This poem fits the bill so nicely. It's a great story and is a potent entry for the contest. Good luck. Robert

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019

Thanks. I'm so glad you liked Jerry Jing-Jang. He's a lot of fun to write.

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 31-Oct-2019

You're welcome

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

evidently Rusty was let free so Jerry Jing-Jang could catch him another day. What a life of a cowboy! I hope that he's not another Wild Bill Hickock, or Wyatt Earp.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019

Thanks. JJJ is the good guy. If he caught Rusty, that would be like the Coyote catching the Roadrunner. What would I do for his next adventure?

reply by Rosemary Everson1 on 31-Oct-2019

he can catch the bad guy! Thank you.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a chilling story of what took place on hangman's hill and the ghosts that still lurk with a scary atmospheric, I'm so glad they let him free! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019

Thanks. If anything happened to Rusty, Jerry Jing-Jang would have nothing to do but herd cattle. Who'd read that?

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is a brilliant entry for this particular contest and season dear Cindy! I think you have successfully managed to convey the spirit of haĺloween!
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed It!

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

This is quite a poem! Great entry for the Halloween poem. Your poem also told a whole story from beginning to end. The rhythm and rhyme just added to the pleasure of the poem. Thanks for sharing this enjoyable poem!
Patty

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019

Thanks. So glad you enjoyed it.

reply by Patty Palmer on 30-Oct-2019

You're very welcome!