The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Willow"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from Sagnik Das
Well, what would have such wondrous work worth wisdom wrought, had Walsingham been alive! -- It would have worked its way straight into the Elizabethan 'Wall' of Fame (no pun intended)!!! LOL ....
Wow, Carolyn! -- What in the world did woo you to write such a work fraught with puerile warmth, whose words I wobble to pronounce!! -- And, when will you ever stop winning me over?! ...
The Willow shall now have no reason whatsoever, to wilt or repine ... Wonderful work!
[And does that suffice enough? (For, this weary reviewer is woefully out of breath!!!)] LOL ...
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Well, what would have such wondrous work worth wisdom wrought, had Walsingham been alive! -- It would have worked its way straight into the Elizabethan 'Wall' of Fame (no pun intended)!!! LOL ....
Wow, Carolyn! -- What in the world did woo you to write such a work fraught with puerile warmth, whose words I wobble to pronounce!! -- And, when will you ever stop winning me over?! ...
The Willow shall now have no reason whatsoever, to wilt or repine ... Wonderful work!
[And does that suffice enough? (For, this weary reviewer is woefully out of breath!!!)] LOL ...
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Wonderful, wondrous, weeeeeevooooos, written by you. Did you really think it was good? We have a willow tree that died and has to be removed. I was thinking of how I will miss its mystical shape and wrote this poem in about 10 minutes. I am so glad you like it, Sagnik. That makes my day, Love, Carolyn
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LOL ... It was not simply 'good', my beloved friend ; it was 'SPLENDID'! - and certainly calls for a reward in honor of its vitality ...
Say Carolyn, what do you want? (I'm serious!) - I'll vouchsafe you something today, in commemoration of your beloved tree ... what do you intend? (please don't deny - I sincerely want to bequeath you something today) ...
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Surprise me!
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Alright! - Just wait & watch! ...
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If I don't reply for a while its because we are leaving home for the remainder of the day, it is our anniversary. I will be looking forward to your surprise on my return. I am excited to see what it is. Thank you in advance. Carolyn
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Oh! How wonderful! -- Then, that calls for a reward greater yet! Enjoy, dear Carolyn! (You shall behold it upon return) ...
:)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Well my friend what can I say with all the double uu,s lol make this a bit of a tongue twister I enjoyed though well done regards Jill
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Well my friend what can I say with all the double uu,s lol make this a bit of a tongue twister I enjoyed though well done regards Jill
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Yes it is kind of a tongue twister isn't it? Glad you enjoyed it. :-) Carolyn
Comment from david bell
This is great I love the idea of starting every line with a word that starts with a w. Now try a poem where every line start with the same word.
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This is great I love the idea of starting every line with a word that starts with a w. Now try a poem where every line start with the same word.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Uh Oh, a challenge is in the offing.! I will work on that. Thanks for the great review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
I love weeping willow trees. It's neat how you used mostly "w" words to write your poem about the majestic tree. Very good.
Kat
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Hi Carolyn,
I love weeping willow trees. It's neat how you used mostly "w" words to write your poem about the majestic tree. Very good.
Kat
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Thanks Kat, Who knows what we are going to dream up, right? Thanks for liking this one. Carolyn
Comment from jmdg1954
You and your poetry can stand tall with the best of the best on this site! Your use of the "w" words was not forced and made perfect sense to what you were describing to the reader. Exceptional, Carolyn, only the bookstore awaits you!!
JohnnyD
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You and your poetry can stand tall with the best of the best on this site! Your use of the "w" words was not forced and made perfect sense to what you were describing to the reader. Exceptional, Carolyn, only the bookstore awaits you!!
JohnnyD
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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What bookstore and when? Will you be my agent? LOL I am getting closer and closer to letting one loose. You are such an encouragement to me John, :-) Carolyn
Comment from GangGreen
A bold experiment and succesful, a celebration of the letter'W' which winds through this work wonderously, removing the need for punctuation as the 'W' slows the reading down in parts setting the poems pace. Also interesting to read a 'willow tree' perspective on things. John (GangGreen)
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A bold experiment and succesful, a celebration of the letter'W' which winds through this work wonderously, removing the need for punctuation as the 'W' slows the reading down in parts setting the poems pace. Also interesting to read a 'willow tree' perspective on things. John (GangGreen)
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Wow John, thanks so much for the great review and golden plus. I am glad you for 'Willow' interesting. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Oh the alliteration in this is utterly breathtaking! A most enjoyable and peaceful read. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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Oh the alliteration in this is utterly breathtaking! A most enjoyable and peaceful read. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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And thank you for enjoying this one. I am happy you found it to be a peaceful read. Carolyn