Comment from GE Parson

Excellent

" ETHEREAL?" I think I'm in the wrong poem home!
Very good ABC poem. It read real smooth and has a
thoughtful message hidden in mystery.
God bless & Bless God
Your Christian Friend, Jerry

BTW Did my latest posting, "God's Hand Faster Than the Eye" get sent t you?

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013

What a fun review, thanks for the comments. I am a little bit behind in my reviews. I will check for 'Gods Hand.' Have a great weekend. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This is a nice ABC poem to send us launching into outer space to get a closer look at those shiny stars. Lets forget our lives and dream a bit. It helps. Nice.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013

What a neat review Bill. Thanks, Carolyn

Comment from rhonny

Excellent

Very nicely written and in keeping with the chosen form. Your words take us with you to that realm. You have painted a great picture for us.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013

I appreciate your fine remarks. Thank you so much. :-) Carolyn

reply by rhonny on 25-Aug-2013

:O)

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Catapult me to the stars
Dramatically increase my view
Ethereal realms beyond belief
Forgotten the disconsolate hour
Wondrous tranquility embrace

Beautiful ABC wrote girl. Anything that can dramatically increase you capacity for the stars I'm all in favor of.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013

Glad you liked it Pam, :-) :-) :-) Carolyn

reply by Gungalo on 24-Aug-2013

Smiile.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

It's such a wonderful thing that we can dream and imagine soaring to the stars. Just getting away for awhile.. Very well written. And the perfect picture. Luff Linda xoo

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013

Thank you for the lovely review. That would be a nice little trip. :-)Carolyn

reply by l.raven on 24-Aug-2013

Hi Carolyn, Yes it would.. xxoo

Comment from krys123

Excellent

"Forgotten the disconsolate hour" did you really want to mean "Forgotten that (down, depressed) hour" or downtrodden.
To me that's somewhat confusing. I could see being shot out of a cannon or being a piece of fireworks, being shot into the sky like an ethereal being and then looking down on a dramatically tranquil embrace. Quite a very interesting poem. I did capture the meaning overall. Thank you for sharing such a very interesting and delightful piece. You have a good one and may the sun always shines on your shoulders.
AK

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013

Forgotten all of those :-) Thanks again for the encouragement you give and I'm happy you found it interesting. :-) Carolyn

reply by krys123 on 24-Aug-2013

You are so welcome Carolyn. ,:~}

Comment from Ackanem

Excellent

The line "Dramatically increase my view" really speaks to me. To broaden our thinking and the way we see things, is a reward in itself. This is a lovely, lovely poem that left me with a very peaceful feeling. The picture you selected is a perfect choice. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 24-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013

And thank you for such a wonderful review and the 'stars'. :-) Carolyn

Comment from emjaihammond

Excellent

I really love the feel of this poem. A hum-drum life is never boring if we can just find ourselves catapulted to the stars, What a great idea, and you have written it in such a great partnership with the art work here.

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 Comment Written 24-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013

I am so pleased you liked this one. Thank you for the great comments. :-) Carolyn