Comment from G.B. Smith

Exceptional

Hello there my sweet friend
Nancy, I have missed seeing your works here for the longest time. This poem is a magnificent example of your poetic heart at work. The artwork surely does ignite out muse's heart
Bear

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Awww Bear! I'm REALLY going to try to get on here a little more often! It's very nice knowing I was missed here. Thank you for the incredible six star review, it REALLY means a LOT coming from you!
Bless You! :o) Nancy

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

What a beautiful very poetical inspiration Helvi. Excellent style and magical imagery in each line, it is like a wonderful Fairy tale, soft and delicate.
A pleasure to read . Thank you for sharing. Pili

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Hi My Friend,

Receiving a wonderful review like this from you means a LOT! Your lovely review made my day! I'm SO glad YOU enjoyed this! :o) Helvi

reply by Pili Pubul on 12-Aug-2013

Love that poem. Enjoy the day. Hugs Pili

Comment from Perp Ihebom

Excellent

This is really a nice piece of fantasy poetry about the fairy queen and her fairy movement through the sky. I enjoyed the beautiful flow and fine rhymes. Bravo!

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Hi Perp,

THank you for the wonderful review and the Bravo you ended it with! They meant a LOT to Me! :o) Helvi

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

Your poem is lovely and it compliments the image superbly well. I liked this verse best:
Serenity and joyful hearts,
Will bless those who are nigh
Enjoy the feelings that might be
Before the moments by

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Hi Curly,

Knowing you think my words compliment the image that goes with it are just the words I want to hear. Thank you SO much for your lovely review! :o) Helvi

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

No Helvi2 I don't think you've lost your touch. You have woven a lovely magical fairy story around this beautiful artwork.Great rhythm and flow to this delightful read.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Hi Pearl,

Thank you for your lovely compliments on my poem. It means a lot knowing you think my writing skills are up to parr. I'm SO glad you enjoyed the poem. :o) Helvi

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Hi, Helvi - good to see you back writing.

I enjoyed your poem. It flows nicely and creates a pretty picture. I am going to point out a few things, but they are all tiny flaws and easily corrected.
stanza 4 bare --> bear
stanza 5 sites --> sights
stanza 6 to --> too (you make that error in your notes, too)
stanza 7 you use the word 'it' twice but it is not at all clear what you are referring to. 'she' (the fairy queen) would make more sense as would 'they' (the queen and her unicorn steed)

Cheers

Steve

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Hi kiwi,

In stanza 4 I used bare as the spelling because of the meaning "expose something" and that is what I was referring to.

Stanza 5 in Stanza 5 I used the word "sites" to refer to a place not something you see. NAturally I do hope someone sees these special sites though.

Stanza 6 It could be that I mispelled "to" I did a lot ot rewriting....I'll check it out

Sranza 7 I just re-wrote to say:
Serenity and joyful hearts,
Will bless those who are nigh
Enjoy the feelings â??that might beâ??
Before the moments by

Thank you for taking time to let me know where I might have erred. I appreciate your time and help very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. :o) Helvi

Comment from DanielEkine

Excellent

This poem of the author is very well written. Great format and rhyme. Nice presentation. The art work is magical. My best part, "Her lightweight horse is elegant
A beauty such as she
Exquisite in its form and grace
As magic things should be."

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Hi Daniel,

Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and found a favorite verse. :o)

Comment from visionary1234

Excellent

What a total delight, Helvi! I've always been a sucker for fairies and you're right - the picture is inspirational and I think you did it justice! One question:
In sites one can't ignore - do you mean in 'sites' as in places, or in 'sights' as in things you see???

:) Sharyn



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 Comment Written 11-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Hi visionary, I meant sites as a place not as something you see.Thank you for your lovely review, I'm SO glad you enjoyed the poem. :o) Helvi

reply by visionary1234 on 11-Aug-2013

oh good - I wasn't quite sure Helvi - I THOUGHT so, but wanted to check! As I said ... a sucker for fairies! :)))Sharyn

reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Hi Sharyn,I appreciate you looking out for me! Thanks! :o) Helvi

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

I have been watching the TV series, Once Upon a Time, recently and has since changed my view on fairy tale characters. I think I have lost my innocence :)

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 Comment Written 11-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Hi CR,

Was a little confused from your review if you like fairies or not. I figured you must beacause you seemed to enjoy my poem. Thank you so much for taking the tome to read it and for the wonderful review. :o) Helvi