Sewn Into the Sky
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Comment from Mastery
Hi, Greg. "teasing tomorrow" Great alliteration here.
and here "Slippery sleep elusive" and again here: "taunting, tapping blind"
Good sounding poetry from start to finish. Bob
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Hi, Greg. "teasing tomorrow" Great alliteration here.
and here "Slippery sleep elusive" and again here: "taunting, tapping blind"
Good sounding poetry from start to finish. Bob
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Wow thanks Bob, such a fantastic review. I really appreciate it. You always give me great confidence. Sorry there's no certificate on it I just realized. So very much thank you!
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The pleasure is all mine, Greg. Bob
Comment from Jean Lutz
Sounds like a soul searching for the light. It can be found when one seeks with all of his heart and all of his mind. Another great offering from you.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Sounds like a soul searching for the light. It can be found when one seeks with all of his heart and all of his mind. Another great offering from you.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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You got it. Always spot on. Thank you so much for reading And liking it!
Comment from country ranch writer
rest you head and sleep tight for tonight for tomorrow is a new day and you will not be lost and be able to find your way to where ever you was headed
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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rest you head and sleep tight for tonight for tomorrow is a new day and you will not be lost and be able to find your way to where ever you was headed
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you, I agree, truly thank you
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welcome
Comment from Dean Kuch
A beautifully penned look at one trying to find themselves. The last stanza was exceptionally haunting;
So as the stars part,
allow the sun to see
Be the spark to ignite,
to illuminate the dark
Please...find me
Please...find me, indeed. Many of us go through our lives, wondering, 'What am I here for? What is my purpose, my contribution to having been here? Some learn the answer to those questions, some, sadly, never do.
Through prayer for guidance, and through the therapy of our writing, I believe we can all find that answer. Some may not like what they find when they get there, but the answers are out there. We simply have to drop to our knees once in a while, and softly whisper..."find me."
Magnificent writing, Gregory!
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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A beautifully penned look at one trying to find themselves. The last stanza was exceptionally haunting;
So as the stars part,
allow the sun to see
Be the spark to ignite,
to illuminate the dark
Please...find me
Please...find me, indeed. Many of us go through our lives, wondering, 'What am I here for? What is my purpose, my contribution to having been here? Some learn the answer to those questions, some, sadly, never do.
Through prayer for guidance, and through the therapy of our writing, I believe we can all find that answer. Some may not like what they find when they get there, but the answers are out there. We simply have to drop to our knees once in a while, and softly whisper..."find me."
Magnificent writing, Gregory!
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you Dean, so much. Yes we are always on the same page with that. My soul is glowing, always, but the fire, the passion in my personality is faded, ashes. but, the embers still burn. We just have to write and pray. We've both seen some dark places and God has found us. We just have to ask to be found. You're the best man. Thank you for your inspirational words and great insight. Really.