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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow! You reeealllly got me with the ending... did not see that coming. Verrrry clever, and the mark of a good short-short story, that twist at the end. Great entry, and I can see it winning!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Wow! You reeealllly got me with the ending... did not see that coming. Verrrry clever, and the mark of a good short-short story, that twist at the end. Great entry, and I can see it winning!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Thank you so much for your cheerful and encouraging review.
Comment from lorijean
What a scary man and story, well written, I am sure there are a few in that prison that should be eliminated, a great read, thank you for sharing...the artwork is great too
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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What a scary man and story, well written, I am sure there are a few in that prison that should be eliminated, a great read, thank you for sharing...the artwork is great too
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind and encouraging review.
Comment from Craigitar
Well written little story with an unanticipated twist--I did not see the Warden angle coming. Good job and luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Well written little story with an unanticipated twist--I did not see the Warden angle coming. Good job and luck with the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind and encouraging review.
Comment from A Matter Of Words
Creepy picture! This is very well written and perfectly titled. I liked the twist of the prisoners becoming the victims; the disposable ones. Good job.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Creepy picture! This is very well written and perfectly titled. I liked the twist of the prisoners becoming the victims; the disposable ones. Good job.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind and encouraging review.
Comment from Gungalo
LOL I guess he would make it that way eh? A nice little story about why a prisoner would be transferred from one facility to another.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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LOL I guess he would make it that way eh? A nice little story about why a prisoner would be transferred from one facility to another.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Thank you for taking time to review this.
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Sounds like Warden Sanders has a bloodlust no prison can quench. I enjoyed reading your story for this contest, my friend. Good luck with this.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Sounds like Warden Sanders has a bloodlust no prison can quench. I enjoyed reading your story for this contest, my friend. Good luck with this.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind and encouraging review.
Comment from Jade Lawson
Wow, what brief story, I liked your approach in this contest, original and different. It could be an interesting story indeed with continuation. Good luck for the contest, it is very well written, good flow and the artwork choice is great.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Wow, what brief story, I liked your approach in this contest, original and different. It could be an interesting story indeed with continuation. Good luck for the contest, it is very well written, good flow and the artwork choice is great.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind and encouraging review.
Comment from adewpearl
How does a guy murder over a dozen men in prison without once getting caught? Wouldn't they at least isolate him even if they couldn't prove his guilt after let's say the third suspected murder?
This guy sounds like one nasty man, but I can't even think about that for wondering how incompetent the prison guards are. LOL :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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How does a guy murder over a dozen men in prison without once getting caught? Wouldn't they at least isolate him even if they couldn't prove his guilt after let's say the third suspected murder?
This guy sounds like one nasty man, but I can't even think about that for wondering how incompetent the prison guards are. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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Sanders, the murderer, is the warden.
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Thank you for reviewing this story.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a spooky story it reminds me of something redemption can't think of the name good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing well done
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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This is a spooky story it reminds me of something redemption can't think of the name good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing well done
Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from dennis0530
The illustration says it all. The prisoner has only been in prison a few days. Though unexplained, the blood flowing from his eye signifies that he already sees blood. And he's screaming to have the job done.
His silent scream, fist clenched around the iron bar and contorted face picture all the rage waiting to be released.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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The illustration says it all. The prisoner has only been in prison a few days. Though unexplained, the blood flowing from his eye signifies that he already sees blood. And he's screaming to have the job done.
His silent scream, fist clenched around the iron bar and contorted face picture all the rage waiting to be released.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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Thank you for your kind review.