The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Cloudy"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from amarherig14
The problems we face in life do not let us make intelligent decisions But the light that is Him will help us clear our minds. He said He will never leave or forsake us.I do hope this what you meant.Good imagery and a beautiful picture to present your poem.Good luck in the contest with this inspiring entry.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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The problems we face in life do not let us make intelligent decisions But the light that is Him will help us clear our minds. He said He will never leave or forsake us.I do hope this what you meant.Good imagery and a beautiful picture to present your poem.Good luck in the contest with this inspiring entry.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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I could have spelled that Sonshine..Thanks so much for your comments. :-) Carolyn
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You are welcome, Carolyn. What a great title for your poem had you thought of it!
Margie :)))
Comment from Curly Girly
This is excellent! I hope somebody gives you 6 stars for it because it is deserving of it. Well said and well done. I wish that I had read this when I was young and volatile.
Clouds cover the sky
Emotions cloud good judgment
Sunshine dispels cloud
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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This is excellent! I hope somebody gives you 6 stars for it because it is deserving of it. Well said and well done. I wish that I had read this when I was young and volatile.
Clouds cover the sky
Emotions cloud good judgment
Sunshine dispels cloud
Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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What is that saying 'If I knew then, what I know now' . Thanks Nicole for a wonderful review of this one. Carolyn
Comment from Dean Kuch
A magnificent 5-7-5 poem, with a deep and positive message. Good judgment and rational thinking always prevails to one's own benefit, in the big scheme of things.
A great entry for the contest. Good luck to you!
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A magnificent 5-7-5 poem, with a deep and positive message. Good judgment and rational thinking always prevails to one's own benefit, in the big scheme of things.
A great entry for the contest. Good luck to you!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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I appreciate all you have said, I enjoyed your comments so much, if I could rate them you would get a 6. Thanks for reading and reviewing, :-) Carolyn
Comment from persevere
This is a short and sweet 5-7-5.You have encapsulated the mood shift that sunshine brings about.Of course clouds are an indication of weather to come as well as making the present a bit hazy.
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This is a short and sweet 5-7-5.You have encapsulated the mood shift that sunshine brings about.Of course clouds are an indication of weather to come as well as making the present a bit hazy.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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Isn't that right? Thanks so much for the wonderful review. Carolyn
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Nicely written and a clear connection between the three lines.
You have shown how clouds seem to block out the sunshine in our lives be it emotional cloud or a dismal day.
Both clouds can be cleared by a healthy dose of sunshine.
I like that you have demonstrated this so well.
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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Nicely written and a clear connection between the three lines.
You have shown how clouds seem to block out the sunshine in our lives be it emotional cloud or a dismal day.
Both clouds can be cleared by a healthy dose of sunshine.
I like that you have demonstrated this so well.
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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Thanks for your wonderful review of this one and the encouragement you gave. Carolyn
Comment from braham20191
Love it. Concise yet carrying a punch.
Great play on words and the use of cloud literally and in a metaphor.
Impressed.
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Love it. Concise yet carrying a punch.
Great play on words and the use of cloud literally and in a metaphor.
Impressed.
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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I appreciate your great comments. :-) Carolyn