The Walking Dead
What's with Zombies?15 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is great Roxie. Society is sick, that's what it takes to entertain them. Have you noticed that almost everything on TV is violent? Murder, Deadly, Look at the Titles. The Sit-coms are gross. My father said that TV was the big Evil when it first appeared on the scene. It started out tame enough, but has gradually poisoned the minds of the public to accept almost anything as normal.. I'm old, I'm glad I am almost out of here. I hope I don't have to come back.
Nancy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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This is great Roxie. Society is sick, that's what it takes to entertain them. Have you noticed that almost everything on TV is violent? Murder, Deadly, Look at the Titles. The Sit-coms are gross. My father said that TV was the big Evil when it first appeared on the scene. It started out tame enough, but has gradually poisoned the minds of the public to accept almost anything as normal.. I'm old, I'm glad I am almost out of here. I hope I don't have to come back.
Nancy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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Yes, I am amazed by what is on TV now, even in the commercials. Nothing is off limits or private anymore. We are dehumanizing people this way.
Between TV and the Internet humans become less and less human and that's why we have so much murder and mayhem in real life. Parents need to be really vigilante in what they allow their kids to see, but they really aren't. When you see so much starting at such a young age, it becomes a bigger problem.
I always try to write the network when there are things I feel shouldn't be on TV, It is so easy to do now and takes just a minute and I have seen it have an effect as I'm sure I'm not the only one writing. Thanks so much Nancy. Have a good day.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is very well written true about the zombies and vampires I like the way this is written drawing the reader to the closing so much can be learned from having faith and reading the bible it has many answers well done o this write regards Jill
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2012
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Hello my friend this is very well written true about the zombies and vampires I like the way this is written drawing the reader to the closing so much can be learned from having faith and reading the bible it has many answers well done o this write regards Jill
Comment Written 30-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2012
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Thank you. =}
Comment from Writingfundimension
Hi, Rox. I found so much great humor in this piece. I like your sense of the absurb - zombies needing to be shot so many times LOL. You make some really good points, but then I am not and never have been fan of the zombie stuff. Thanks for putting a smile on my face, and for you excellent reminder about Jesus. Hugs, Bev
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2012
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Hi, Rox. I found so much great humor in this piece. I like your sense of the absurb - zombies needing to be shot so many times LOL. You make some really good points, but then I am not and never have been fan of the zombie stuff. Thanks for putting a smile on my face, and for you excellent reminder about Jesus. Hugs, Bev
Comment Written 30-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2012
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Zombies are such silly things. =} Thanks Bev. Happy New Year!
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You're welcome, Rox. Xxx Bev
Comment from EMB
I love that show. If the zombies were as resourceful as you propose, the protagonists of the show would last for a good twelve minutes. LOL This was a very humorous post, and I enjoyed i a great deal.
(Can't wait for the next season to start.)
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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I love that show. If the zombies were as resourceful as you propose, the protagonists of the show would last for a good twelve minutes. LOL This was a very humorous post, and I enjoyed i a great deal.
(Can't wait for the next season to start.)
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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I have lots of friends who love the show, I haven't seen it but hear about it a lot. Thanks for the good review.
Comment from adewpearl
I saw a friend's tweet - add the apostrophe for possessive
tweet, he said - replace comma with a period
I get a car - I'd get
I mean, these guys -add the comma
stiffed legged - stiff legged
I'd defiantly get a car - definitely
I'm laughing at your humor - I know if I were a traffic cop I'd avoid ticketing zombies LOL
I love the commentary on stealing stores blind since everyone else is in hiding LOL
Get out of there, you idiot - add the comma for direct address
Jesus die - died
I think most of this would make a great stand up comedy routine until you went serious and brought in Jesus, which seemed not to fit with the rest of it :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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I saw a friend's tweet - add the apostrophe for possessive
tweet, he said - replace comma with a period
I get a car - I'd get
I mean, these guys -add the comma
stiffed legged - stiff legged
I'd defiantly get a car - definitely
I'm laughing at your humor - I know if I were a traffic cop I'd avoid ticketing zombies LOL
I love the commentary on stealing stores blind since everyone else is in hiding LOL
Get out of there, you idiot - add the comma for direct address
Jesus die - died
I think most of this would make a great stand up comedy routine until you went serious and brought in Jesus, which seemed not to fit with the rest of it :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Goodness, I read these things over at least 20x you'd think I see some of these errors! Thanks for pointing them out. I think I fixed them all. Thanks for the good review.
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It is human nature to read your own writing the way you intended it, not the way it turned out on the page. That is why I love the reviewing element of Fan Story - we each get fresh eyes to look our stuff over. I'm far more likely to see your errors than my own and vice versa :-)