Fragile Beauty
Designed Butterfly Shape poem22 total reviews
Comment from Twomoon
this was a lovely poem in the presentation and the power of the words that touched the heart of the butterfly! A job well done.. thanks for sharing and I felt it move! xx twomoon
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this was a lovely poem in the presentation and the power of the words that touched the heart of the butterfly! A job well done.. thanks for sharing and I felt it move! xx twomoon
Comment Written 19-Jul-2012
Comment from J. P. Egry
This shape poem is utterly amazing! Both the design and the poem are absolutely beautiful. You have accomplished a light breezy effect, giving the reader a feeling of almost floating along on air currents with the butterfly. I can't imagine how you ever managed to perfect this on this site---I have enough difficulty just with my word processor. I keep thinking that it must have taken hours! You should have a 7 just for the effort! But I also know that the challenge is the fun of it.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012
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This shape poem is utterly amazing! Both the design and the poem are absolutely beautiful. You have accomplished a light breezy effect, giving the reader a feeling of almost floating along on air currents with the butterfly. I can't imagine how you ever managed to perfect this on this site---I have enough difficulty just with my word processor. I keep thinking that it must have taken hours! You should have a 7 just for the effort! But I also know that the challenge is the fun of it.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012
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Thank you SO much for your truly complimentary review J.P! I am honored and delighted you liked it SO much and gave me a six star rating!!!! I know what you mean about our editor. "Evil Ed", definitely an be a PAIN to work with! I put everthing together in Microsoft word before I dare enter "Eddie's lair" here. Once I get there HE has a tendency to tangle my work and I have to straighten it out! I have to say it's worth it when I get lovely reviews like this. Thank you again! :o) Helvi
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You're very welcome! I loved everything about the poem.
Comment from Judian James
BRAVO Nancy! This is outstanding. Your poem as a tribute to the butterfly is really lovely on its own but the creativity involved to shape it so perfectly into a butterfly, also deserves kudos. One little nit for me: There are two rebel question marks within the piece that I think I would delete, as well as the exclamation point. I thought they distracted and weren't really necessary. Otherwise, a beautiful, beautiful artistic piece and poem.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012
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BRAVO Nancy! This is outstanding. Your poem as a tribute to the butterfly is really lovely on its own but the creativity involved to shape it so perfectly into a butterfly, also deserves kudos. One little nit for me: There are two rebel question marks within the piece that I think I would delete, as well as the exclamation point. I thought they distracted and weren't really necessary. Otherwise, a beautiful, beautiful artistic piece and poem.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012
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I'm thrilled you enjoyed this SO much My Friend ! Thank you for the absolutely AWESOME six star review! I am honored beyond words! Thanks for pointing out the nits too, your help is ALWAYS appreciated by me. Hugs and Smiles, Nancy
Comment from donkeyoatey
You are just amazing good at these! I especially like the line..this stunning coaster of the sky..just makes great mind pictures! Donkeyoatey
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You are just amazing good at these! I especially like the line..this stunning coaster of the sky..just makes great mind pictures! Donkeyoatey
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Helvi
Love it when you do your delightful shape poems
To me the one with the butterfly is one of your best I have seen so far,
smiles to you.
Gert
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Hello Helvi
Love it when you do your delightful shape poems
To me the one with the butterfly is one of your best I have seen so far,
smiles to you.
Gert
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
Comment from ShannyT
I have never read a shape poem but yes it was very much like trying to watch a butterfly. Thank you for sharing, well done.
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I have never read a shape poem but yes it was very much like trying to watch a butterfly. Thank you for sharing, well done.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Helvi,
How long does it take to figure this out? It's absolutely beautiful!
Your word choices and final picture are amazing. . I love it.. ..and you.
Hugs,
Jj
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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Helvi,
How long does it take to figure this out? It's absolutely beautiful!
Your word choices and final picture are amazing. . I love it.. ..and you.
Hugs,
Jj
Comment Written 03-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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Hi my Friend, I was just about to send you an email to see if you were ok? I'm Glad to see you back! When I do one of these shape poems I do the shape and poem seperately, then fit the poem into the shape. It's a lot easier to do in microsoft word. When the poem and shape are fitted together I come here.THe editor here always causes trouble and it may take me two or three days to get it formatted the way I want. I love doing it though and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Hope to add some of these to our book if you don't mind! Bless you and thank you for the wonderful review my Friend! Hugs and Smles, Helvi
Comment from Hollyhock
Wow! How clever and fragile and as perfect as we mortals are going to get.
This must have taken you for ever!
I love your choice of words, "flaunt - fragile - coaster - drifter -" and phrases like "lithe wisps" and "streams softly thru" all epitomize the delicacy and lightness of the butterfly. And to get everything into the pictorial shape is just wonderful.
I think I'm running out of things to praise, it's all so good, and I'm not usually this "gushing" about anything.
For me,this poem is a thing of beauty in itself.
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Wow! How clever and fragile and as perfect as we mortals are going to get.
This must have taken you for ever!
I love your choice of words, "flaunt - fragile - coaster - drifter -" and phrases like "lithe wisps" and "streams softly thru" all epitomize the delicacy and lightness of the butterfly. And to get everything into the pictorial shape is just wonderful.
I think I'm running out of things to praise, it's all so good, and I'm not usually this "gushing" about anything.
For me,this poem is a thing of beauty in itself.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2012
Comment from micci
I love butterfly's they are beautiful, your poem shape is great and the poem is well written, I enjoyed reading it a lot, good job
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I love butterfly's they are beautiful, your poem shape is great and the poem is well written, I enjoyed reading it a lot, good job
Comment Written 03-Jun-2012
Comment from G.B. Smith
Sweetie Nancy, this is spectacular. I have tried to figure out the way to do it and my mind fogs over. I love everything that you do. You are such a charmer. How is life treating you now that you're free? Well I hope
Bear
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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Sweetie Nancy, this is spectacular. I have tried to figure out the way to do it and my mind fogs over. I love everything that you do. You are such a charmer. How is life treating you now that you're free? Well I hope
Bear
Comment Written 03-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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WOW! This is such a GREAT honor coming from you Bear! I'm SO glad you enjoyed this and appreciate your six star rating VERY much! I'd like to thank you for your review at Fan Art too! I am thrilled you reviewd my work there too! THank you for bring such a wonderful fan and for the lovely six star rating here. Smiles and HUgs, Nancy