O Africa Beware
A Rhymer19 total reviews
Comment from cvcopac
Lots of information, keen observations, and perspectives written into this small well crafted poem, Kamran. I know too how the animals are being systematically killed into extinction. Unusal rhyme scheme with a refrain and something serious to think about.
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Lots of information, keen observations, and perspectives written into this small well crafted poem, Kamran. I know too how the animals are being systematically killed into extinction. Unusal rhyme scheme with a refrain and something serious to think about.
Comment Written 30-May-2012
reply by the author on 30-May-2012
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cvcopac my friend, I am honored by your visit and the wonderful insights, thank you very much for the encouraging review.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Ameen. When I think about and look back upon the type of writing you did when we first met and the caliber of how you write now, it leaves me with a big sigh. This is beautiful. xoxo Kiwi
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Hello Ameen. When I think about and look back upon the type of writing you did when we first met and the caliber of how you write now, it leaves me with a big sigh. This is beautiful. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 30-May-2012
reply by the author on 30-May-2012
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xoxo my friend, you are one of the first person kind enough to guide and help me walk and I shall always be grateful to you; I thank you for the visit and the encouraging comments, take care my friend.
Comment from A.R. Curry
I typically don't like this type of art. (I prefer the more detailed) but I like your peice. The green shading, the colorfullness you add with the hair beads and necklace. Most of all, I like the teeth!! Good job. Best of luck to you.
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I typically don't like this type of art. (I prefer the more detailed) but I like your peice. The green shading, the colorfullness you add with the hair beads and necklace. Most of all, I like the teeth!! Good job. Best of luck to you.
Comment Written 30-May-2012
reply by the author on 30-May-2012
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Hello CurillaPress and welcome to the site, I thank you for your time and the kind review, good luck on the site.
Comment from thmedina
Ameen! Stupendous political piece. Your words, your message very well executed. Strong! I enjoyed the rhyming scheme you put in there. It flows harmoniously. And now the yellow! Great stuff. Great stuff.
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Ameen! Stupendous political piece. Your words, your message very well executed. Strong! I enjoyed the rhyming scheme you put in there. It flows harmoniously. And now the yellow! Great stuff. Great stuff.
Comment Written 30-May-2012
reply by the author on 30-May-2012
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Medina my friend, I am delighted that you like the write, I appreciate your wonderful, generous review, thank you very much.
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What's not to like? LOL. Its a great political piece! Thank you again...
Comment from sunnilicious
'O Africa Beware' is not such a funny poem. That picture is scary too. But really, I think the place has gotten much better. Improvements everywhere not just South Africa either.
Nice style. Good work.
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'O Africa Beware' is not such a funny poem. That picture is scary too. But really, I think the place has gotten much better. Improvements everywhere not just South Africa either.
Nice style. Good work.
Comment Written 30-May-2012
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Hello sunnilicious, my friend, I thank you for your time and the kind review, take care.
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
What a powerful piece, Kamran- please accept a virtual six for this educational piece of history- it is so sad what has happened to that country, and you have so eloquently stated it. Great effort! Holly
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What a powerful piece, Kamran- please accept a virtual six for this educational piece of history- it is so sad what has happened to that country, and you have so eloquently stated it. Great effort! Holly
Comment Written 30-May-2012
reply by the author on 30-May-2012
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Holly my friend, I thank you for the wonderful, encouraging review, very happy that you like it; God bless you.
Comment from Jane Johnson
Nicely written. I liked the line "Nothing has changed in greed's delight." This verse flowed well and the structure makes sense. Thanks so much for sharing. I like the artwork you chose; it is most appropriate.
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Nicely written. I liked the line "Nothing has changed in greed's delight." This verse flowed well and the structure makes sense. Thanks so much for sharing. I like the artwork you chose; it is most appropriate.
Comment Written 30-May-2012
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Hello Jane, my friend, I am pleased you like the poem, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from TammyGail
This was great ameen
like always you bring something grand
to the table, loved your powerful wording
and great use of imagery
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reply by the author on 30-May-2012
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This was great ameen
like always you bring something grand
to the table, loved your powerful wording
and great use of imagery
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Comment Written 30-May-2012
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Tammy my friend, so glad you like the poem, appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from Gungalo
You are right Ameen. Time and time again, we are there. But what has it gotten them? Realty says it all. What a blooming facade.
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You are right Ameen. Time and time again, we are there. But what has it gotten them? Realty says it all. What a blooming facade.
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Comment Written 30-May-2012
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Gunga my friend, I thank you for the wonderful, encouraging review.
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