Double-Dip
Among consenting adults...12 total reviews
Comment from Glasstruth
LOL. Very sexual, but tastefully done. Love the whole poem, but especially the ending: "then measured her rumpus,
said, 'Blimey, let's try double-dipping!" Great write! Les
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reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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LOL. Very sexual, but tastefully done. Love the whole poem, but especially the ending: "then measured her rumpus,
said, 'Blimey, let's try double-dipping!" Great write! Les
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Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you, Glasstruth. I'm glad you enjoyed. X
Comment from c_lucas
Taking the magic wand in hand is one way to satisfy the beast. Demanding too much of it power will weaken it's magicc. This is very well written.Good luck in your contest.
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reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Taking the magic wand in hand is one way to satisfy the beast. Demanding too much of it power will weaken it's magicc. This is very well written.Good luck in your contest.
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Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you, Charlie. I'm glad you enjoyed. X
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You're welcome. Charlie