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Comment from peggles
I thought this chapter was very chilling engrosingy and very interesting
your writing is so visually described you bring your reader along with each paragraph
I look forward to the next chapter
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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I thought this chapter was very chilling engrosingy and very interesting
your writing is so visually described you bring your reader along with each paragraph
I look forward to the next chapter
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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peggles, Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review. Bill
Comment from Axiom Gray
Wow! This story was riveting! The twist in the end where Ms. G is some mutant freak that is preparing to take over the world is awesome. The fact that the M.L.E. knew about it the whole time is even cooler. I'm really glad you decided to share this. Mr. Schott, you are a superstar!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Wow! This story was riveting! The twist in the end where Ms. G is some mutant freak that is preparing to take over the world is awesome. The fact that the M.L.E. knew about it the whole time is even cooler. I'm really glad you decided to share this. Mr. Schott, you are a superstar!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Mr. Gray, Thank you for your thoughtful response to this story.
Comment from Misrael
Very weird and creepy and very interesting and I hope that there is more to come. Very good fiction and kept my attention which is good sience I sometimes have trouble staying focused. Good job.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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Very weird and creepy and very interesting and I hope that there is more to come. Very good fiction and kept my attention which is good sience I sometimes have trouble staying focused. Good job.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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Thank you for your kind review and encouragement.
Comment from TXOxxxooo
I really enjoyed your work-
Descriptive and moved along nicely.
Only a suggestion, more emotion! (though your ability to convey feelings through architectural description is noteworthy-
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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I really enjoyed your work-
Descriptive and moved along nicely.
Only a suggestion, more emotion! (though your ability to convey feelings through architectural description is noteworthy-
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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Thank you for your kind and helpful review.
Comment from Chris Tee
Bill this is an absolutely interesting story that we have here. It was a pleasure to read and review this rather splendid work here old sport.
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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Bill this is an absolutely interesting story that we have here. It was a pleasure to read and review this rather splendid work here old sport.
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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Chris, Thank you for your kind review.