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A Triolet, wildly modified

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Comment from Joan E.
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Extraordinary! I hope I can still walk when I'm eighty-six!! I like your use of the repeats in the triolet to emphasize her unbelievable age. -Joan

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. I don't really want to get this old. Well if I was fit as she I might think different-LOL.
Comment from artemis53
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Wow. I'm going to have to get my act together again. This is great Robina. I like this triolet. it is a little easier for me to understand as you've crafted it. I just may 'get it' one of these days soon.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much for your kind review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine
Comment from judiverse
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Wow! Isn't she something! Very enjoyable triolet and you were true to the format. Your repeating lines "An eighty six year old German Frau" have an excellent flow and accent your theme. Many of us fall short in the exercise department, even the young ones, so she sets an excellent example. judi

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much for your kind review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine
Comment from c_lucas
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Age is a matter of the mind. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. It is a good thing that one should have a young mind as the body grows older.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much for your kind review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine
reply by c_lucas on 29-Mar-2012
    You're welcome, Robina. Charlie
Comment from peggles
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I thought this was very interesting
It has a easy flow and is smooth to follow
The rhyming and style fir well together
what a lady
well done

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine
Comment from misscookie
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Wow!
She put me and a lot of young folks to shame.
God bless her
I love this poem and it casopturemy attention from the fuirst line to the last.
As the saying goes if you don't use it you will lose it.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine
reply by misscookie on 29-Mar-2012
    Your very welcome, have a blessed day also.
Comment from Dutchie
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Wow, great this triolet. Great video too!!! I walk a lot, but I must say, I don't see me doing this. I'm a little bit jealous... Such a fun to read. Liefs Fia

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine
Comment from Rizmalik
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Hello
Surely she deserves to be on the Guinness book and you have expressed the feelings in a very simple way. Such people do need our admirations and we must look up to them and learn. keep up the good work.
Regards
Malik

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 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine
Comment from elgone
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Wow, that is remarkable! What a great and inspirational video. Makes one feel ashamed for not maintaing the same sort of strength and she obviously has. Thank you for sharing it.

E

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine
Comment from Realist101
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Whoa, Ine. Unreal! I can barely walk most of the time...I would love to know her secret. It makes me hurt to watch this. ? But so neat...thank you! And your poem is a great narrative too! I'm beginning to like YouTube? hugs!! and love, Susan

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 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. I can't even wald 1 kilometer.
reply by Realist101 on 29-Mar-2012
    But we should try tho, Ine! I did yesterday...and my knee hurt. I used to walk ten miles a day, five days a week! YEARS ago. I hope you are doing well. How do you feel now? Pm anytime...hugs! Susan
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Well my condition improves but ever so slowly and my tablets for the blood pressure were changed as I got side effects on one I had.