A Good Day For Jumping
a song to my father17 total reviews
Comment from jmshumate
This was really good. It had good content, good flow, and it rhymed well, it must have been a special moment singing this to your father. God bless you in this time.
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This was really good. It had good content, good flow, and it rhymed well, it must have been a special moment singing this to your father. God bless you in this time.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2011
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thank you for your comments. Blessings Katie
Comment from Trybuck
Sounds like your dad is an all American Hero, one in which you can be very proud to call Dad.
May the Lord strengthen, comfort, and give you and your family peace in the midst of all that's going on.
Very well done, Buck
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Sounds like your dad is an all American Hero, one in which you can be very proud to call Dad.
May the Lord strengthen, comfort, and give you and your family peace in the midst of all that's going on.
Very well done, Buck
Comment Written 12-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2011
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Buck thank you, yes I would call him a hero. He will be missed. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from dportwood
Katie,
When a poem touches me as this one has, it gets a six. I loved it all from beginning to end, and I was a soldier, not a marine. Great song.
Duane
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Katie,
When a poem touches me as this one has, it gets a six. I loved it all from beginning to end, and I was a soldier, not a marine. Great song.
Duane
Comment Written 12-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2011
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Duane, thank you I appreciate your heartfelt comments. Blessings Katie
Comment from mumsyone
Even before I read about your father's diagnosis, I liked your poem but didn't realize it is a song. It's wonderful that you were able to sing it to him.
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Even before I read about your father's diagnosis, I liked your poem but didn't realize it is a song. It's wonderful that you were able to sing it to him.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind comments. It was a blessing to be able to share the song with him.
Comment from anabellapongasi
Hi Katie,
I was so excited to see a notice in my PM that you posted something today. But when I saw the picture and read your poem-song and your notes, my heart broke. I'm so sorry to hear about your dad. I'll pray for strength and comfort for the whole family. I can sense your peace and surrender to God on this matter through this sad time. I'm sure you are surrounded with lots of prayers and Christian love too.
What a beautiful song you have written for your dad..
Well done.
Love and hugs,
Anabella
God's arms, their (they're) open wide
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Hi Katie,
I was so excited to see a notice in my PM that you posted something today. But when I saw the picture and read your poem-song and your notes, my heart broke. I'm so sorry to hear about your dad. I'll pray for strength and comfort for the whole family. I can sense your peace and surrender to God on this matter through this sad time. I'm sure you are surrounded with lots of prayers and Christian love too.
What a beautiful song you have written for your dad..
Well done.
Love and hugs,
Anabella
God's arms, their (they're) open wide
Comment Written 12-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2011
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Anabella, thank you so much for the prayers. I believe that prayer is what is getting us through this. I wasn't sure if I should post this, being such a personal piece and than I though that my friends here should know too, so they can be praying. Thanks for catching my miss spell too. LOL
Comment from wiskas677@yandex.ru
This is a wonderful song of love for your Dad. Bravo. Also there is a timeless quality about it...in other words this song could be for a lot of dads out there with a few simple word changes. thanks for sharing
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This is a wonderful song of love for your Dad. Bravo. Also there is a timeless quality about it...in other words this song could be for a lot of dads out there with a few simple word changes. thanks for sharing
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2011
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Thank you very much for your comments, they are appreciated. Blessings Katie
Comment from Yeti777
Wonderful poem, a very spirited tribute to your father. I don't think I want to see the video... I don't look good in tears. Your father is in my prayers, and I will thank God for His gift of this fine warrior's service and sacrifice for our country. Beautiful work. Blessing to you. Sean
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Wonderful poem, a very spirited tribute to your father. I don't think I want to see the video... I don't look good in tears. Your father is in my prayers, and I will thank God for His gift of this fine warrior's service and sacrifice for our country. Beautiful work. Blessing to you. Sean
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2011
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Sean, thank you for your wonderful comments. I appreciate your understanding and prayers.