Reigniting Your Flame of Youth
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Main Causes of Old Age"Physical, and mental self-theropy.
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Comment from anabellapongasi
Hi Knowledge,
You kept me interested. I can't wait to find out more about these important glands, where exactly they are located and how to massage and stimulate them to reignite my flame of youth! LOL. Thank you for sharing.:)
Anabella
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Hi Knowledge,
You kept me interested. I can't wait to find out more about these important glands, where exactly they are located and how to massage and stimulate them to reignite my flame of youth! LOL. Thank you for sharing.:)
Anabella
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
Comment from TheBrokenPoet
This sounds like a very intriguing book to read. Though I am, admittedly, one of the types of people who puts a lot of toxins into my body =). I'm of the mind that if my emotional and spiritual self is healthy & my mind is active, I'll live a very fulfilling life regardless of how long it is.
You know, this really makes me think, which is an excellent quality for a book to have, or any written work for that matter. I hope you'll elaborate more on this, and look forward to reading it.
I did find several errors in the text (I'm an editor for a living, so this is automatic for me), which I've listed so corrections can be made:
Random edits:
They and other glands keep are the key to your youth." 2nd paragraph. This sentence needs the "keep" removed, or be elaborated on - probably a typo.
"...diluting their drink with a fruit juice or something else to lesson their natural adverse reaction." The word "lesson" is the noun - i.e. learning a lesson. In this context, it should be "lessen" as in "to make less."
Paragraph 6: the word acquaintances has an apostrophe at the end, which is improper. There should be a comma between the repeated word, "sad." Finally, in this sentence: "What I want to impress up on you...," upon should be one word in this context.
I look forward to reading more, and I hope you're having a great week!
Jen
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2010
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This sounds like a very intriguing book to read. Though I am, admittedly, one of the types of people who puts a lot of toxins into my body =). I'm of the mind that if my emotional and spiritual self is healthy & my mind is active, I'll live a very fulfilling life regardless of how long it is.
You know, this really makes me think, which is an excellent quality for a book to have, or any written work for that matter. I hope you'll elaborate more on this, and look forward to reading it.
I did find several errors in the text (I'm an editor for a living, so this is automatic for me), which I've listed so corrections can be made:
Random edits:
They and other glands keep are the key to your youth." 2nd paragraph. This sentence needs the "keep" removed, or be elaborated on - probably a typo.
"...diluting their drink with a fruit juice or something else to lesson their natural adverse reaction." The word "lesson" is the noun - i.e. learning a lesson. In this context, it should be "lessen" as in "to make less."
Paragraph 6: the word acquaintances has an apostrophe at the end, which is improper. There should be a comma between the repeated word, "sad." Finally, in this sentence: "What I want to impress up on you...," upon should be one word in this context.
I look forward to reading more, and I hope you're having a great week!
Jen
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2010
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I really appreciate your help with my edits. My Dyslexia drives me nuts at times. But it gives me a wider outlook on life, so it is a blessing.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
Comment from Triumphant
Very well written. I usually ignore "medical" pieces, but this one caught my eye. The art selection was well made. Pleasant to the eye.
The information was well distributed in a healthy number of paragraphs, so the eye was NOT overwhelmed with text.
The context was informative and helpful... without sounding overwhelming, punishing, or "you're gonna die if you don't do this!" No condescending attitude, but made me feel welcomed as a reader.
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Very well written. I usually ignore "medical" pieces, but this one caught my eye. The art selection was well made. Pleasant to the eye.
The information was well distributed in a healthy number of paragraphs, so the eye was NOT overwhelmed with text.
The context was informative and helpful... without sounding overwhelming, punishing, or "you're gonna die if you don't do this!" No condescending attitude, but made me feel welcomed as a reader.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010