A Penny For Your Thoughts
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Comment from babylonia
zeezee,
i love the remark about the cougar. i first heard that term on two and a half men. my hubby says so that's what they are going to be calling you when you get older, eh? LOL
definitely a good one. made me smile. easy to read and follow. the reading is great as well. imagery is excellent. no spaggies that i can see. keep up the good work~
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2008
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zeezee,
i love the remark about the cougar. i first heard that term on two and a half men. my hubby says so that's what they are going to be calling you when you get older, eh? LOL
definitely a good one. made me smile. easy to read and follow. the reading is great as well. imagery is excellent. no spaggies that i can see. keep up the good work~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 19-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2008
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A fun write for me. I need to go to the light now.. short days bum me out. And you go girl.. being a cougar ain't all bad. Ha Ha. Thanks for reading/listening. ZeeZee
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zeezee,
charlie's mom sure looked like she was enjoying it. :P
hope you have a great day.
love,
barbara
Comment from Nicky B
I wondered what he would think if I told him my only thought at the moment was to mount his face and yell, "Giddy Up."
Well at least in this way you wouldn't have to look at his face.
Great saucy read zeezee. You are one wild and adventurous vixen. More power to you.
Nick.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2008
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I wondered what he would think if I told him my only thought at the moment was to mount his face and yell, "Giddy Up."
Well at least in this way you wouldn't have to look at his face.
Great saucy read zeezee. You are one wild and adventurous vixen. More power to you.
Nick.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2008
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OMG.. I love the bit about not having to look at his face. That never occurred to me. LMAO.. you are a hoot honey.. Hey, when you going to write something? I have not seen a post in a while... me hungry to read the Nick. Thanks for the great review. ZeeZee
Comment from adewpearl
Oh, Lord, I pretty much know the moment I see your name that I'm about to smile a great deal. I have several homeless guys who really like me at the Center where I volunteer, and I'm pretty sure one of my sex offender adult literacy students has a crush on me, but other than that, I almost forget what sex is. LOL Living vicariously through your pieces is rather delightful. Your narrative voice is unmistakable, and your innuendos and asides are priceless.
Thank you for adding some spice to my life. Peace, Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2008
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Oh, Lord, I pretty much know the moment I see your name that I'm about to smile a great deal. I have several homeless guys who really like me at the Center where I volunteer, and I'm pretty sure one of my sex offender adult literacy students has a crush on me, but other than that, I almost forget what sex is. LOL Living vicariously through your pieces is rather delightful. Your narrative voice is unmistakable, and your innuendos and asides are priceless.
Thank you for adding some spice to my life. Peace, Brooke :-)
Comment Written 19-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2008
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Ha Ha.. this was much fun for me yesterday. It took 4 hours to do 4 minutes. Writing/audio. I did enjoy it though. Glad you enjoyed the read/listen. Thanks for the encouragement. A sex offender ... hmmm. Velly interesting. dang honey. Thanks much Brooke. ZeeZee
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Don't be danging too much - the guys in this program are not only sex offenders but either mentally ill/mentally challenged or both - I think my guy is both. When I wear sandals he thinks I have the nicest feet he's ever seen except his mom's. LOL
I imagine he got himself into trouble much like Lennie in Of Mice and Men.
You are wicked. And also most talented. Good morning, Brooke :-)
Comment from bluefly
Hi zeezee,
This is a very well written story with a neat little twist at the end that leaves the reader craving more. The dialog flows smooth and natural, and the action and detail are seamless.
Very Nicely Done!
Scott
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2008
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Hi zeezee,
This is a very well written story with a neat little twist at the end that leaves the reader craving more. The dialog flows smooth and natural, and the action and detail are seamless.
Very Nicely Done!
Scott
Comment Written 19-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2008
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Hi Scott, thanks for much for spending 4 minutes with me. I hope you were able to listen. I so appreciate your taking the time to visit and leave a review. Thanks, ZeeZee
Comment from Nomar Chagrin
Delicious (pun intended) voice. Sultry, yet sassy.
Masterful writing as usual, Zee. You put a ton of meaning in a small space. Classic lsat line. But what a devious heroine.
your read sauce (obvious typo)
But I do adore your read sauce, with it's exotic meaty taste, is it veal? (quotation marks and space between the lines)
Dessert with you must be an extraordinary experience. :-O
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2008
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Delicious (pun intended) voice. Sultry, yet sassy.
Masterful writing as usual, Zee. You put a ton of meaning in a small space. Classic lsat line. But what a devious heroine.
your read sauce (obvious typo)
But I do adore your read sauce, with it's exotic meaty taste, is it veal? (quotation marks and space between the lines)
Dessert with you must be an extraordinary experience. :-O
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2008
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Hi Rheinlander. I remember dessert. A fond memory. I thought I fixed that spaggie but I will return to the scene of the crime and fix it. Thanks much for spending time with me. ZeeZee
Comment from c_lucas
Again, your wit brings a dull setting into a bright, exciting one. I enjoyed this well written story and your little innuendoes. You have mastered this form of writing. I loved the part about you leaving your dull date at curb.
But I do adore your read (red) sauce,
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2008
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Again, your wit brings a dull setting into a bright, exciting one. I enjoyed this well written story and your little innuendoes. You have mastered this form of writing. I loved the part about you leaving your dull date at curb.
But I do adore your read (red) sauce,
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2008
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Hi Charlie. Thanks for catching the read..red ... I am still practicing this form of entertainment. Thanks for hanging in with me. ZeeZee
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You're welcome, Zee. Charlie
