Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Exceptional

Noah is determined to become a real family man, he loves Sami that much. Once that happens, perhaps she will stop being so nervous. I'm sure there must be a wedding coming up soon. They can't carry on like this much longer, not the way their emotions are spirreling out of control. Excellent chapter, my friend. :)) Sandra

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

I will make that correction. Thank you for the catch and the kind review.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading your chapter! Your characters, especially Noah, are coming to life in such a real way. I love the way Noah's awkwardness around Sami's family feels so natural. The playful moments with Greg and the tender moments between Noah and Sami make it so heartwarming. It keeps me hooked! Keep up the great work!

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thank you for the encouragement.