Comment from lancellot

Excellent

This is a well written, detailed, and paced chapter. It is easy to follow, but the reader doesn't know all the rules for, let's call it magic or supernatural in this universe. Some things are 'magically' done, others aren't, as things mix with mysteries and law enforcement.

But it is interesting.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2025

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I hope Eleanor also shares about Grayson with Garth. He's needs to know so he protects Rebecca. I really like this story.

. " And good evening to you, Garth. Sorry to bother you two, but we need to talk," (Delete the space before 'And' and the quotation mark)

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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

Carol,

This story is starting to get intense. I knew you had another Eleanor story in you. So no we have more ghost on the scene and I think it's only going to get worse. This Cornelius character doesn't sound like he is a nice man.

Great job my friend.

Cecilia

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