Humitree
A poem of creation, my word is create23 total reviews
Comment from Jim Wile
Fantastic monorhyme poem, Lea! You definitely exceeded the requirements of this contest. This should be a sure winner.
Such a neat followup to your previous poem about this unusual hybrid couple tasked with repopulating the earth with a new species. These accompanying pictures are fantastic too. I really loved this poem.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Fantastic monorhyme poem, Lea! You definitely exceeded the requirements of this contest. This should be a sure winner.
Such a neat followup to your previous poem about this unusual hybrid couple tasked with repopulating the earth with a new species. These accompanying pictures are fantastic too. I really loved this poem.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Hello, thank you! The most amazing review and the big 6. Wow, that's a real honor thank you! It's starting to become a thing. Perhaps I shall see. Will the rest of this new species goes. Thank you Jim for the rocking review! The amazing rating in most of all, your time, which is precious as everyone's thank you again!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
you nailed the format of this contest and created a rich world filled with alien creatures. I like the image chosen and like these lines the best
Ancient ooze the last to wait
distilate
Human tree a hybrid state
inseminate
Mixed genes rolling dice bent gate
commiserate
Set the stones with strong debate
retaliate
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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you nailed the format of this contest and created a rich world filled with alien creatures. I like the image chosen and like these lines the best
Ancient ooze the last to wait
distilate
Human tree a hybrid state
inseminate
Mixed genes rolling dice bent gate
commiserate
Set the stones with strong debate
retaliate
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Totally glad you liked this one completely pleased.Thank you very much! Always happy to see you here. You've usually got on point things to say, and you don't say anything unnecessary, and I believe you're truly truthful in everything that you do r saying. I think you deserve everything santa can bring you! Thank you again, thank you for your time. Have an amazing holiday for I don't chat with you again until later!
Comment from EILEEN LAW
So cool. All the same rhyme could. Be. A rap Song. Cool. Picture too. You write all the time.....do you ever rest? Creative juices flowing
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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So cool. All the same rhyme could. Be. A rap Song. Cool. Picture too. You write all the time.....do you ever rest? Creative juices flowing
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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No rest for the wicked they say.... I wonder about the good wicked....? thank you for the awesome six star I'm amazingly happy to receive them and appreciate so very much!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Wowie zowie!!! Your creativity and poetic license are off the charts with this one!! So vivid and terse and exceptional!!
This one has Winner's Circle ALLLLL over it!!
Awesome artwork you created for it, too!! Total package here!!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Wowie zowie!!! Your creativity and poetic license are off the charts with this one!! So vivid and terse and exceptional!!
This one has Winner's Circle ALLLLL over it!!
Awesome artwork you created for it, too!! Total package here!!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Wow, stunning review, stunning stars. Bobbit, thank you so very much. Your words always inspire me. Miss rockin redhead! I have been taken over by the writing Bub. Then fleshing out my chapters, creating different poetry. Tried one of those 10 lines, 2 stanza's Atlantic parameter typhones. That was a challenge. I don't think I got it right. But well, what are you going to do? Thank you again this is awesome!! Hope your night's great!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Now this is how I interpreted this brief as a monorhyme with your base word, create. You really are on a roll with this theme, Lea! The visual is amazing and the woman reminds me of you:) I think I'd like to go through this metamorphosis! What a great word, 'primordiate' and they all link together so well. Your wonderful verse is vividly bursting forth with new life, a hybrid between human and tree and creating immense power and beauty. This theme, inevitably, born from your passion for trees and nature evolves into a brave new world, perhaps. Well done and good luck, Lea. Warmest wishes, Debbie.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Now this is how I interpreted this brief as a monorhyme with your base word, create. You really are on a roll with this theme, Lea! The visual is amazing and the woman reminds me of you:) I think I'd like to go through this metamorphosis! What a great word, 'primordiate' and they all link together so well. Your wonderful verse is vividly bursting forth with new life, a hybrid between human and tree and creating immense power and beauty. This theme, inevitably, born from your passion for trees and nature evolves into a brave new world, perhaps. Well done and good luck, Lea. Warmest wishes, Debbie.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Once again the most amazing review! You see things so succinctly very cool! I'm glad you like it. I'm glad you're enjoying artwork and word play and all that! And you're right. I do love the mountains and the trees and all things natural. I don't hate that thought. I'm not having any trees! A few humans that I quite adore need to hang around too! Thank you. I really appreciate this in your time. Words. And your thoughts and insights. Always a pleasure. Have a wonderful holiday. I don't talk to you again.I'm going to you and yours have all the best!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are having fun with these hybrids half human half tree creations Lea and I am enjoying your musings. Do you think that humans could inherit the seasonal shedding of leaves every year? This could leave these humans with no hair! A fun post and I enjoyed the creative end rhymes too, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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You are having fun with these hybrids half human half tree creations Lea and I am enjoying your musings. Do you think that humans could inherit the seasonal shedding of leaves every year? This could leave these humans with no hair! A fun post and I enjoyed the creative end rhymes too, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Dolly, as always, you give the most amazing reviews! Glad you like my artwork on the qualm. On my brain, that's going a little bit wacko, picking up these interesting, thanks, I love the trees.I couldn't see them being gone forever. Thank you again. I hope that your holiday was would be great. Hope you have an awesome evening!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This contest entry has left me speechless. I'm not even sure what to say about this BOLD poem. The rhyming scheme and the one-word statements are amazing. I doubt you'll need it but good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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This contest entry has left me speechless. I'm not even sure what to say about this BOLD poem. The rhyming scheme and the one-word statements are amazing. I doubt you'll need it but good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Wow Barbara, that is the best thing you could have ever said to me. Yeah, you really like this is balm to my ears. I'm super glad you like it. I'm coming from you a very wonderful writer. I might add, it is doubly, so. Thank you for your well wishes for your great review. I really hope that you have an amazing holiday and that that force is with you! Lol thanks again. Oh yeah, i'm actually making these pictures.They turned out pretty good.I'm pleased with them
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Beautiful and interesting artwork that you selected for your poem. Also, the writing was well done. The rhyme scheme allowed for a great flow while reading.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Beautiful and interesting artwork that you selected for your poem. Also, the writing was well done. The rhyme scheme allowed for a great flow while reading.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you again Monica! I actually do my own artwork.Really glad you like it! I'm happy you like the poem as well! Your time is busy at this time of year, so I really appreciate you. Stopping in for a read, offering a comments. Let's kind of fine rating too. I hope you have the best holiday ever and you get all you deserve and want!
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Well, we may have to get together for some illustrations on some stories I have been working on, IF you are interested, of course.
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I'm thinking that's a brilliant idea
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Humitree, uses the word 'create' in an imaginative way which brings the procreation thoughts of humankind into the advancement of life in general.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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This poem, Humitree, uses the word 'create' in an imaginative way which brings the procreation thoughts of humankind into the advancement of life in general.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Holy smokes Bill! Super glad you like it! And then it comes at such a busy time of year.I doubly appreciate it! Thanks for reading offering you great comment. And you're fine rating. I really hope that you have the best holiday and everything you wish for comes true!
Comment from Avery Daniel
Wow, the rhyme scheme of this poem is... simply breathtaking. Such a beautiful use of words which build upon each other. This poem is an incredible ode to nature-- and even humanity-- that is brilliantly worded and VERY strong.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Wow, the rhyme scheme of this poem is... simply breathtaking. Such a beautiful use of words which build upon each other. This poem is an incredible ode to nature-- and even humanity-- that is brilliantly worded and VERY strong.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Well, thank you very much Avery. I appreciate your kind words and great insight into this poem. I am pleased that you like it. I make all my own pictures too. I had some fun writing it. Thank you again, and I hope you have the best holiday and santa brings you everything you want and need!