Manitree
What would happen if....26 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Wow! Like a fantasy/sci-fi experiment gone wrong, all presented within the Acrostic form!
Manitree. This is your creation?
I googled the word and guess what came up?
Your poem!
Did you know you are sharing your FanStory posts with the general public?
If so, great!
If not, you need to "opt out" of that by checking the appropriate box when you post!
Great image as well!
You give new meaning to finding our roots!
(smile)
Karenina
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Wow! Like a fantasy/sci-fi experiment gone wrong, all presented within the Acrostic form!
Manitree. This is your creation?
I googled the word and guess what came up?
Your poem!
Did you know you are sharing your FanStory posts with the general public?
If so, great!
If not, you need to "opt out" of that by checking the appropriate box when you post!
Great image as well!
You give new meaning to finding our roots!
(smile)
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Hello, thank you so much for coming in and reading and expressing yourself so well, and yes, I am all over the internet. Actually, you google my name Lea Tonin, there are pages and pages of stuff. I mean, because I have some books on this. Or a book on the shelf at the moment book, two coming along shortly.Alright, publish on multiple poetry sites as well. That's cool that it did that, though. Manitree is definitely my made up name for a new species, hybrid plant and human. Lol find our roots haha! Thank you for your great review, your time. And your awesome reading, I appreciate it very much. Hope you have a really great holiday with you and yours and an awesome night too!
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You definitely have a web footprint (and I don't mean like a duck)--
Good for you!
Sorry it's been so long between visits.
Life keeps interrupting!
:)
Comment from Ulla
This is a great acrostic, Lea, forming the word, mutation. I really liked it and you constructed a beautiful poem around the letters in the word. All the best of luck. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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This is a great acrostic, Lea, forming the word, mutation. I really liked it and you constructed a beautiful poem around the letters in the word. All the best of luck. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Ulla thanks so much! Best is that you like it?And that is my goal, my reader enjoys it! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and to comment and offer your great rating.All of which i'm grateful for. I wish you and yours a wonderful holiday and hope Santa brings you all you need and deserve. Thank you again.Have a great night!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Manitree - I like it. Great word. And great caricatures, quite lovely (she, mostly) smiley face here
This is quite creative. Terrific work.
And best wishes.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Manitree - I like it. Great word. And great caricatures, quite lovely (she, mostly) smiley face here
This is quite creative. Terrific work.
And best wishes.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thanks, wayne.I'm totally glad you like it! Bit of a spin from the usual butt, I always feel like experimenting! Thanks again, my friend. Hope you're doing well. And your family's good too chat soon!
Comment from Begin Again
You certainly took a dive off the cliff and let your mind develop a new life of sorts, and your chosen picture matches the words. I'm not very good at deciphering poems, but I believe I got the gist of this one and not only understood but enjoyed it.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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You certainly took a dive off the cliff and let your mind develop a new life of sorts, and your chosen picture matches the words. I'm not very good at deciphering poems, but I believe I got the gist of this one and not only understood but enjoyed it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thanks, Carol. That's so awesome of you to say. I'm really glad you liked it. Truly, i'm always happy with readers like what I write.It encourages me to carry on. I am assuming you're a novel writer, or perhaps a script writer or a songwriter, I can sense from your writing that you certainly have a well spring all the information and words to choose from. Thank you again have an awesome night!
Comment from DonandVicki
This poem/acrostic does what all good poetry should do and that is fully engage the readers imagination. This brought out fantastical and vivid images fore.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This poem/acrostic does what all good poetry should do and that is fully engage the readers imagination. This brought out fantastical and vivid images fore.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm super happy you like this one. It's an experiment trying on a new species, just for fun. I appreciate your kind review.And your great rating in your time most of all, thank you so much for this. And I really hope that you have the best holiday in your day is going grand!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very impressive acrostic poetry contest entry. The words you chose are perfect for creating vivid imagery in your readers minds. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This is a very impressive acrostic poetry contest entry. The words you chose are perfect for creating vivid imagery in your readers minds. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Coming from you, Barbara, that is the best compliment ever! I am just ecstatic that you like it! I'm considering a whole new world for the manitree. We'll see how it goes. Thank you once again for your kind review it.Awesome rating and your time.Most of all, and i'm still wishing you an awesome holiday and new year 😀
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wow, Lea, that's a truly explosive mutation! Love "the deviant soup" and the unstoppable force of this new creation as it terrorises nature, bursting forth in its new hybrid identity of man and tree - the Manitree. Well done on the acrostic element too. My only suggestion for the last line which doesn't really make sense is: Never doubt this transition of race, the birth of Manitree! Good luck, Lea! Warm wishes, Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Wow, Lea, that's a truly explosive mutation! Love "the deviant soup" and the unstoppable force of this new creation as it terrorises nature, bursting forth in its new hybrid identity of man and tree - the Manitree. Well done on the acrostic element too. My only suggestion for the last line which doesn't really make sense is: Never doubt this transition of race, the birth of Manitree! Good luck, Lea! Warm wishes, Debbie
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Debbie, I took your suggestion to heart, and I used a variation of the line you gave me, which tends to make things a little bit smoother, so great suggestion on your part. Thank you! So i'm glad that you like this.This is a little bit of a leap, but hey, it's turning out to be fun. Again, I thank you for your wisdom for your time and your great reading.May the force be with you!
Comment from nomi338
I do not believe I have ever seen a poem whose illustrations so perfectly match the words to a tee. Your words create a mental picture clearly articulated and then to see an illustration that makes perfect representation of what is written is in my mind, perfection. Bravo.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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I do not believe I have ever seen a poem whose illustrations so perfectly match the words to a tee. Your words create a mental picture clearly articulated and then to see an illustration that makes perfect representation of what is written is in my mind, perfection. Bravo.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Wow! Thank you so much. I'm really pleased that you like this. Such wonderful words and the great, amazing rating to I am truly humbled to receive. Best of all. You liked it, so doubly pleased about that. I made the picture as well. Trying to hone the craft, if you will. I appreciate your kind words in your time truly.And I hope you have the most wonderful holiday ever.And you're having an amazing evening as well!
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I meant every word I wrote. I am truly amazed at your skill. I guess by now, I should never underestimate the skill of any and all of FanStory's writers.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely down across as a follow up to your other poem. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful Christmas and may you have a very happy new year. Patricia.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This is a nicely down across as a follow up to your other poem. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful Christmas and may you have a very happy new year. Patricia.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you again, my friend reading reading, commenting all a wonderful thing of which I appreciate very much! And I too.Wish you the same for your holidays and hope the big guy makes it down your chimney with everything you wish and need! Thanks again have an awesome evening!
Comment from jaded831
If evolution is to be believed, eventually we may have Manitrees. I love trees and plants and treat them with respect. Your poem makes me think I like that and it is well written in the Acrostic style.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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If evolution is to be believed, eventually we may have Manitrees. I love trees and plants and treat them with respect. Your poem makes me think I like that and it is well written in the Acrostic style.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hi, thank you so much for your amazing review. Hi very much appreciate it! I'm very happy you stopped in to have a read to offer your kind comments and your great rating too! I hope you have the most amazing holiday and everything you I wish for comes to thanks again.Enjoy your evening!