Sunset at 5:30
a sacred time16 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful artwork and nice presentation, Elaine.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-Effective imagery paints a good word picture
of the "sunset at five-thirty."
-A very good concluding line.
-A very good entry; good luck!
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-Beautiful artwork and nice presentation, Elaine.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-Effective imagery paints a good word picture
of the "sunset at five-thirty."
-A very good concluding line.
-A very good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
That's a great word, Elaine - 'gloaming' and not often used now so you might want to put a definition as a footnote. This is a mesmerising sight that you skilfully capture, imaginatively and succinctly. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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That's a great word, Elaine - 'gloaming' and not often used now so you might want to put a definition as a footnote. This is a mesmerising sight that you skilfully capture, imaginatively and succinctly. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Begin Again
I could plant my feet in the sand and sit and stare at the setting sun everyday. It's such a beautiful site, inspiring us to be thankful for the day, yet promising to return tomorrow. Gorgeous!
Smiles, Carol
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I could plant my feet in the sand and sit and stare at the setting sun everyday. It's such a beautiful site, inspiring us to be thankful for the day, yet promising to return tomorrow. Gorgeous!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your 2-4-2 poem perfectly captures the brief, yet magical moment of twilight. The simplicity and elegance of your words paint a vivid picture of the evening's transition. It's a beautiful reflection of nature's daily routine.
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Your 2-4-2 poem perfectly captures the brief, yet magical moment of twilight. The simplicity and elegance of your words paint a vivid picture of the evening's transition. It's a beautiful reflection of nature's daily routine.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Lana Marie
Will I learn something reading your entry for the contest. I did not know what gloaming meant. I really like the picture that you used in the words go so well with it. Thank you for teaching me something new well reviewing your poem.
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Will I learn something reading your entry for the contest. I did not know what gloaming meant. I really like the picture that you used in the words go so well with it. Thank you for teaching me something new well reviewing your poem.
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow... those were the days! (wink, wink).... It's dark here by 5:30 this days (a bit chilly too!).... but a great 2-4-2 for the contest! :-) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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Wow... those were the days! (wink, wink).... It's dark here by 5:30 this days (a bit chilly too!).... but a great 2-4-2 for the contest! :-) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
